Hello!
I'm really glad you enjoyed the demo, thank you so much for taking your time to write a review! I'll try to answer your questions the best I can.
On Jenny - they will die in later release(s) and I don't plan on changing that, because that's what sets off the player on their journey to avenge their death. I also have a skill issue, I have no idea how to fit Jenny into the rest of the story, so that's on me lmao
And no, Louise is not a self insert. The character on my page is him, actually!! However, I must confess that I've taken some of my personality traits and given them to another character - no, not Lloyd, I'm not a murderer - but Jenny. They're not a self insert either, just kinda inspired by me.
If you're interested in deeper explorations of their characters, you can check out my Tumblr: Oddheadd
Happy (late) holidays and thank you again for leaving a review!!