Sorry to be horny in a comment, but...
I can't wait to see Vulterus ride the MC...
Death by Snu Snu.
Also, Kai is hella cute, especially during his himbo moments.
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One of the best VN's I've read so far!
How good is it? Well, it got me riled up, emotional, and was able to feel a connection to the protagonist (and his friends).
I share a few things in common with Jet. And to be honest, if he wasn't the MC and was a dateable character instead, I would have gone for him first (he's kinda my type).
I also would have loved a Tread Route, but I'll have to see what's in store for us in the story ahead.
***MINOR SPOILERS***
I just hope Tread's okay, and that their body is somehow immune to the virus.
Sure, we got off a bad start with them, what's with Kabir and all (no offense, but from what we've seen in the story so far, I don't like him). But they're still adorable, and I would like the MC to make amends with them (and maybe more).
All in all, great story so far! And a well crafted one at that! Good luck with your work!
--Minor Error Note:
After the terminal event where we get to know where Tread is held (and selecting a route), when escaping with Daniel, Damion snatches Jet and plans to beat him to death. In most other routes, either Daniel saves Jet, or Jet saves himself (depending on who has the gun).
The problem lies in Garret's route. Instead of skipping right to the part where he saves us, it plays the common story part where Daniel is involved, and only after that, it replays but with Garret involved.
My guess is that the code all goes to this common shared bloc of story before branching off according to who's route is selected.
Garret's route should be an exception instead. And so, a little "if" statement before Damion tries to hit Jet might help.
Something along the lines of:
if (garret_route)
then goto garret_prelude;
Not really used to Python here, but I guess you get the idea.
Anyway, thank you for bearing with me and reading all this!
I don't know what other people have told you, but they are just being mean.
Your project is wonderful and has a lot of potential. Besides, you're working on it alone, and you have a life to take care of too.
They just don't understand the dedication and love that you're putting into this story.
There's a saying here in my country that goes like: "He who can't reach the grape vine says that it is bitter". In other words, they can't make a project like the one you're doing, and so they make others (and you) think that it is not good.
So trust yourself and the people who saw the real value of your game/story, and make it blossom into a creation that will make them regret the day they insulted it.
Of course, it's up to you. But, remember that there is always many people out there who will enjoy this VN and it will have a special place in their hearts .
Good Luck on whatever you intend to do, and stay safe!
I have yet to finish the VN, but it's still amazing!
I actually came back to reading it after a long period of... hibernation.
The new animations and story fixes at the beginning were something I didn't know were needed, as they indeed made the VN better.
On a side note, I think I found a song that would be suitable for Loken as his theme song:
Anyways, thank you so much for your wonderful work!
Yes, this is spoilers, but the routes are interconnected, and break the laws of space and time.
Finishing one route will open up new options and scenes in another one, and if I remember, maybe even in the same route itself.
As if Luke is a being from outside of that world's space-time spectrum, which is also part of my big theory. And yeah, maybe Alon too... How does he talk to you when you're dead in that dark place?
Thank you for taking the time to answer me!
It's exciting to know what you have planned for the story. I also liked how you made each route kinda "versatile", we get to bottom, then get our final prize by topping. No one will feel left out this way.
Oh, and that introduction rework you're making is already fantastic! At first I kinda liked the original one from "The Village That Never Sleeps", but this new one is the best!
One last question, and you don't have to answer it if you don't want to or don't have the time: Will we be able to date/fool around with characters like Jay? I kinda wanted to "get my dick wet" (with somebody's maw around it) in the strip club in Tai's route.
Sincerely, your sex gourmet of a fan.
[Some Minor Spoilers Ahead!]
I know that the Poly route is not finished yet, but I wanted to try it.
While I expected to get a Fuzzy Foxhole or some Chunky Cheetah Cheeks, what I got instead was a Double Serving of Shark Sushi Sausages.
Like, dude, how did Adrian get both appendages fully up his butt? It's not like he has much experience, I think?
Anyway, this isn't a ranting comment. I just wanted to say that I was kinda shocked? Also, the cg that is shown in the other routes when Russell is introduced has him designed better than his sprite, at least in my opinion. The sprite's design kinda makes him look more like a dolphin, while in the cg, it's clearer that he's a shark.
And as always, keep up the good work! You've done amazingly, and I wish you the best!
Have some patience, guys! Remember that the dev also has a personal life with its fair share of problems. Unless he becomes a full-time developer, we can only wait for when he's able to work on his VN and release the builds.
You can try other VN's meanwhile. Who knows? You might find one that you missed and end up liking it too.
I was thinking that maybe this virus affecting the Y chromosome was made for population control in the pre-cascade era. If there are less males, then there will be less births. And it's not like everyone is into having multiple wives. Plus as we can see, the only way for the current species to maintain their numbers was by making drastic changes to the mating culture by coming up with the Mating Troupe thing.
Sooo, it's like shoot your load and go.
