Hello, first of all I’m glad you enjoyed the concept of our game!
Yep, I do understand that the writing is what it is, consider that I have a good knowledge of english language but mainly due to study/work needs; I’m not that good with english dialogues writing and I will take more time in future to study and improve them.
Right now, we are working to expand the demo (you can find the complete develop-path in our Discord) and from that point on we will focus on the new chapters.
Again, thank you for the support!