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oh and just one more note, another side story in the gym would be amazing! and about the gym... i don't think this gym has enough machines for a proper work out, there are like two or three for chest workout only lol, suggest to expand it a bit and add more things into it, but i get that it's just a placeholder for future updates, thanks as always!

i played this game and i really like it, i just got some notes and some bugs that needed to be fixed, i'll start with the bugs;
first, i was in that night where my player needed to go to toilet and things happen, when that girl got on her knees (i don't remember her name im sorry lol) i noticed when she looked up her hair was going though her body, so i suggest physics for hair.
second, i was going downstairs in the part where i was applying to the job, i went to talk to benjamin and there were no options but "Nothing", i couldn't press it, and i believe it's because my player was a bit too far and i was literally stuck, i couldn't pause the game even so i had to quit it, it's kind of annoying so i suggest increasing the area around the player when talking to other characters.

now for the fun part! (the nightmare part for the developer lol) the notes!

i've read some comments and knew that the story cannot be changed, i actually don't have much notes on the story, i just suggest making it less NTR, making benjamin seem like the bad guy in that story, i suggest adding more intractive things, maybe minigames, i suggest adding more places in the town such as a nightclub and making a whole different story to the game along side sarah's family story, there are plenty of things that can be done with this game and i want to thank the developer for working hard on that game, please, PLEASE, do not abandon this game and that project, i really loved it.