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Really interesting game! I loved the design of the navigation along with the use of narration. The major feature I really liked was being able pick which character you were as well as the characters you can bring along with you. The fact that they all had their own unique skill was great too, all the character's abilities helped me a lot and I really enjoyed playing!

I loved the writing and the music! I agree with Marisa on the paragraph separating, but other than that it was really immersive and fun to play! The images were also a very nice touch and I loved the fact that you guys went with the Queen Mary ship, it made the gameplay feel real. Great job!

HOLY-oh my god this is so well written... The music is perfect, the story is so in depth and everything pulls you in immediately. I also like how you can pick your name and pronouns, it makes the game that much more immersive!

OH MY GOD this is beautiful!! I absolutely love the character she is adorable! everything is literally so pretty in this game and the music is very fitting! great job :D

this is such a cute game!! the characters are so well designed and the scenery is laid out nicely, can't wait for the animals to come out i'm sure they're awesome too!

I love the character and the animation! The background also adds a cute touch to the game. I like the shooting mechanic and the fast-moving enemies. My only suggestion would be to add custom art for the platforms or for the enemies. Overall I like the game and I think it's really wholesome!

I love the character and the bats! I found the floor to also be a little hard to move on as well with the friction, and the character's speed was a little fast - but this is a good thing if you want this game to be challenging for the player! Overall I like the theme of the game and I think it's fun to play, the level design was unique too. My only real suggestion I think would be to add a background.

I absolutely love this! The theme is so so cute and the game overall is fun to play! I also like the fact that you have multiple levels in the game as well as unique platforms and characters. Great job!

Really cute! I agree on the character feeling floaty, but there were no bugs or errors. I would suggest adding maybe a few more clouds and more points to collect to make the game a bit longer. I also was confused on the ending too because I was still able to run around and it seemed like there was a little more after that to explore, so I think adding another level or end scene might help with the ending. Overall I think the game has great potential and is fun!

Very cool story! I agree with the previous comments, this game having good potential! Some illustrations or sound effects would really help for sure, and maybe a few extra options or side paths the player can take. Keep up the good work!

Very interesting so far! I like the way everything is written and there is a cool transition between each passage. This has great potential!

Interesting story! I loved the way you wrote everything, it all ties together really well and it's very engaging. I think it has a lot of potential for sure!

Thank you for the tip!! I just tried adding that into the start passage & re-uploaded. Hopefully it's better now! Pictures will definitely come soon :)

I absolutely love the art style in this game! The writing is interesting, I wasn't sure what the monster wanted at first but it was fun figuring it out! I think this game has great potential for sure, it is very engaging!

Really immersive and creepy (in a good way)! I loved the story and the different choices you can make, the art and the sounds really added more depth to it. Everything was clear and easy to understand. Great job!

Wow this is so engaging! I love the fact that you can play it in multiple ways, it kind of reminds me a little of DnD! I ended up dying in my run but everything was clear, the art was a great touch to add to the immersion feeling, and the story sucked me right in! Great job!

Very beautiful story, I love the theme you chose of the afterlife. Although it is just text it is still really immersive and interesting because of the choices you can make and the outcomes of those choices. Great job!

Really interesting presentation of the game! I like the pixelated text and the art. The writing in this is beautiful and the game is very immersive because of that combined with the visuals which all pulls me in. My only critique is maybe it could have a slower introduction to the game but otherwise fun to play!

I absolutely love the story! The game was unique, immersive, and it was easy to understand. It all tied together well and the art was a really nice touch too. I also think that there should be a play again button because the game was very fun!

This game is so immersive! So many different possible endings which is very interesting and it made me want to keep playing again and again! It was clear to understand what was going on and I loved the presentation of the game with the art and the occasional sound effects, it all tied together really well. Great job!

Really engaging and it all ties together well! I liked the idea of switching back and forth from The Great Field to reality, the story itself is very unique as well. It was interesting picking different answers throughout the story and seeing what would happen next. Everything was clear and easy to understand but still provided a little bit of challenge to where it was needed. Great job!