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I really enjoyed this game... while it lasted that is.

I don't wanna sound ungrateful or anything, I know it's just two people making this game but I'm gonna be honest: 15k words is literally nothing. I know that this is partially because it's a kinetic novel, there are no alternative routes or anything and I don't even plan on complaining about that, I don't mind at all if the entire gameplay consists of quite literally nothing but progressing dialogue, it's just that this game has a play time of about 45 minutes to 1 hour depending on how fast you read. I'm not gonna mince my words here - that is a joke. 

I tried making a visual novel myself once and yes, it was a buttload of work, it really was, and I gave up after like four days but that doesn't change anything about the fact that $7 for a singular hour of a kinetic novel is simply not alright. And I'm not even butthurt that I was one of the clowns who spend their money on this because I genuinely don't give a f about $7. What I'm trying to say here is that not even I, without any kind of technical knowledge or drawing skills, would've had the audacity to sell a ONE HOUR game for freaking $7.

All in all, considering the game's play time to price ratio - yep, it is a scam and should either be free with a link to your Patreon or whatever you use to take in donations so that people who liked it can support you guys out of their own free will or it should be combined with the second paid game and cost like $5 at max. Or make both paid games in this series fully playable in browser so that paying money to download the files would be some kind of 'supporter pack' for people who liked your work.

(PS: Itch.io has some serious problem with it's text formatting and there's nothing I can do about that, sorry.)

Will do, thanks.

I was the guy that promised to write a review once I was done playing the game and no, I haven't forgotten about that! The reason I didn't do it yet is because I was waiting for exactly this. I'll still write it, no worries on that, but now I'll have to play it all again lol.

I played the earlier versions of this game and it's actually REALLY impressive how far it's come. I tried making my own RenPy game once but quickly dropped it after realizing what an absolute shitload of work it was. For anyone not familiar with how much it actually is, I'm talking literal hours just to get a few minutes in game (if you want to include AI images that don't look like garbage and clean up some errors that is - and yeah, granted, I did walk into it with zero experience in coding whatsoever). Aside from that it's really nice seeing a game like this not get discontinued and completely abandoned for once.

There isn't really a lot to complain about in this game but one thing that did bother me was that once you get the money for the gym subscription you can grow WAAAAY to fast. If men are much less prone to muscle building in the setting of this game's world it would only make sense that you'd have to work your butt of just to get to a stage that's comparable to the girls innate bodies. I honestly wouldn't mind at all if you needed like three times the experience for muscles and cardio. And maybe it'd even be nice to have some roadblocks in between that gate-keep your growing progress until you complete a certain task or get a certain item or something like that. Tbh I also wouldn't mind if you had to get the steroids for the step sister earlier so that it would take a little longer to get to her higher stages. Ig that's about all. 

Also, basically no spelling errors or typos in this game which is pretty nice.

Nope, nothing works. Not Patreon, not itch.io, not PayPal on both of those. It's definitely not a problem that my issuer can solve it's just that it's a prepaid debit card which isn't accepted by most payment services. It's basically a safety mesure and as long a site doesn't offer bancontact, Klarna or any similar kind of direct online banking payment method there's not really anything I can do. The only thing I could think of would be to directly submit the payment to the bank account that you have linked to itch.io.

or to put it simply: how am i supposed to get access to the full version if the only thing i have is a prepaid debit card that you can use basically nowhere?

um what do i do if my debit card has 17 numbers? i think it's possible to pay with debit cards by using pay pal but they only accept debit cards with 16 digit numbers. guess im screwed?

Gina mentions another FMG game (one made with Twine) at some point. Are you referencing a real game there or is it just a joke (obviously just asking out of curiosity)?

Could you make a post on your DeviantArt that informs about the new update? I guess that a lot of people found the game on there (me as well) and that they might be missing out on it right now.

I just realized that I forgot about the requirements interface (conclusion: retard indeed). PS: Gigachad for responding in under a week

The update info says that you can go up to lvl 3 by now but for some reason it just doesn't go past two in my playthrough (my strengh is at about 55 of the required 24). Do I just have to keep playing, is this intended, is something wrong with my game or is the update info really just about the patreon version (is there even one?)? I could very well imagine that I'm just being impatient or retarded at this point though.