Very pretty game. Loved the atmosphere and had an excellent time until I accidentally jumped out of bounds and fell out of the map when I couldn’t figure out the next step at the sundial thing
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Really enjoyed my time with this short game, and look forward to what future updates might bring.
I particularly enjoyed the art, music, and dialogue sounds. The writing was also good!
A few bits of feedback I wrote down while playing:
- Menus should close when clicking outside of them, and also when another menu is opened
- Highlight feature should remain on after dialogue, especially since some objects are difficult to find without it
- Some runes showed up in the inventory, but most of them didn't? Not sure what's up with that
- Lack of text log - not strictly required, but it's something I enjoy having in visual novels
Neat game! Didn't quite finish it but enjoyed the bits that I played, reminds me of late 00's-early 10's Flash games, in a good way. I feel like a past corpses as shadows similar to the ones in This is the Only Level and other games from that era would've added a nice touch. Or just simple markers for where you died.
Maybe a live death counter too? (but with an option to disable for people who don't like it)
I also happened to notice that your GDD seems to only be available as a PDF download? The rules were updated to require a Google Docs link due to malware risk, so you'd want to address that. Pointing it out because I'd hate to see this fun game of yours get disqualified for something so trivial.