This is an amazing and wonderful game! The graphics are great, the music is enchanting, and the storyline is amazing. I like the concepts of the storyline and the music best. The narration could do a bit better though.
When I am reading the story, some parts of it don't fit in with all the intensity, so please do check the script. Also, some sound effects don't match as well, for example when the potion exploded in Week 10, the sound of it was far more powerful than the descriptions.
Otherwise, wonderful game, great artwork. Keep up the hard work! I will be waiting for the release!