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Drifty come on, you got to stop doing this to me xD. Leap of faith hit me like a ton of bricks and now you dropping this masterpiece!! 

*throws wallet* here just take my money now xD

Fucking hell.... I am sorry this will be a lengthy review 

Drifty I need to understand the process more, are these personal experiences?  the writing the realism the reflection of a choice action or consequence. .. its unparalleled to anything ive played witnessed or experienced... 

There is something here, take out the adult stuff put that to the side for now....

The characters

the women are lovable they pose a realism to themselves their pronunciation their mannerisms, the progression with the MC just feels fluid. 

the development is without a doubt one of the top level stuff here, each choice or action makes you feel think and understand each woman a lot more. 

Progression of story does not feel rushed or anything added as a filler, everything connects and feels fluid (I will use this word a lot I think) I had my favourites from the start but, really started to care about them all as you understand them, some of the events are triggers for me but the realism really hit me...

The Bridge scene feeling that low feeling that useless I have experienced myself, I wont lie it was tough at first but man did I just have nothing but love for Cece afterwards. It went less about the adult stuff and more I just wanted her to be loved, happy and even though it was virtual being there personally I just wanted to make her smile.  I was screaming at my tablet for the MC to run help her! I think i woke the whole block up when I went through that scene.

You captured everything amazingly and I really really am Invested to see more. 

I was wondering how the hell you top Once in a Lifetime, I mean that had me feeling everything and then you start on this and the whole aspect of entering a MMOVRG (MASSIVELY MULTIPLAYER ONLINE VIRTUAL REALITY GAME) Just was such an interesting concept, then I started playing it and the build up to the game was so good the introduction of characters and development in a short period of time was one of the great things about OIALT. Once you get into the game itself I mean holy crap I was just hooked and I was so sad I literally stormed through the current play through that i found myself replaying it a few times.

if there is a few things Caribdis is one of the best for it is character development and hooking you in.

One of the best games i have played in a game pool over well into a hundred VN games played. OIALT is still up there in my top 3 games and it will be very ahrd to knock it off there. 

I wish there were millions supporting you and the amazing stuff you produce!

God Damn I'm invested, I read The Comments and was so worried as I progressed about bad endings and death but I ended up getting so invested in Cassie my heart melted watching her. I've not tried multiple playthroughs yet or harems. I just got so interested in Cassie. The story and play through is solid the scenes are so good.

What I love is what you feel is the right decision or the better one can really be the bad insane fuck things up. I thought being honest with Cassie on day 5 after the talk with Eve was the right thing but I upset her and I genuinely felt guilt and heartbreak xD. Please please keep it up.

Man I can not say this was fun... I can get over the grammatical errors but this feels lazily released for something you are charging for. Numbers in the choices, a fair bit of the story in Russian even though I've got it on English just made it unplayable. I thought it would be a few lines but it went on for a bit and I lost a lot of what was happening or I was agreeing to. It just became a dice roll at one point.

Game crashing on Android a fair bit was annoying but a fresh install seems to have fixed that.

Story and scenes are decent. But they are really overshadowed by these serious issues.

EDIT*

I took a peek over at your subscribestar and saw you had put a lot of effort in so please don't see this as an attack.  But I've played free games that were by far more polished in their releases, I've played some worse as well.  I know a lot goes into these games but it's got to be playable and I enjoyed what I did manage to play so the pieces are there I just think the Android version needs some polishing but I've not played the PC versions so can't comment on them.

For those asking about updates, Hopes has not abandoned the game and far from it, they are working very hard on it still as can bee seen on their patreon. I am sure there is reasons for not updating everyone here but it is still being worked on very hard. lets keep our faith in Hopes and excitedly await more content from this amazing game :)