Largely just stuff I am sure will come natural. Maybe more detail on buildings and such. You have talent, I know you will get there. A great start!
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Good writing style even if the characters and the AI’s leet-speak were a bit grating (though I assume that is a reference to the computer science mantra of “Crap-in, crap-out” and a snarky reference to where our culture is heading), but that’s probably just my taste. Unique concept/premise as well. If it weren’t for the present-day culture references I would get Philip K Dick vibes.
Total crap. Which was the goal, so this art is successfully transcendant. Soundtrack I recommend for reading this: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ok6q1mpQLE0](The Left Rights - poo content warning)
Total crap. Which was the goal, so this art is successfully transcendant. Soundtrack I recommend for reading this: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ok6q1mpQLE0](The Left Rights - poo content warning)