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I enjoyed this a lot so far, the MC is very relatable and easy to blend into. The options to be hesitant/curious/shy are some of my favourites and Lynx and the Mc's interactions are a sweet dance.

Joining the Wanderer contest as well with my nonbinary monster named after the genus of box jellyfish that are highly venomous. 

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This is beautifully written, making a closeted MC an actual ghost is fitting symbolism to how it feels in real life. The way it kills a person slowly and causes you to ignore other injusticies and your own feelings. Nour being the only one MC has opened up to about their pain, being the black sheep of the family helping them understand in a way the other members of the family can't/won't. I can understand how they would be willing to help the MC now that they are a ghost, it's a sad and heartwarming dynamic.

S with the carving and the memories, devastating to loose a friend that way. In my canon playthrough definitely planning to help them not sacrifice their education for the restaurant. Goodbye tradition, if it keeps hurting people it should not go on but be reformed or let go. Although I do love this family restaurant dynamic and the culture should not die! It is possible to have a family and still be yourself, but it takes more than one person.

Specifically I'm very happy that this is a canonically not white and a queer story. I think more games where you can somewhat create the main character should still force you to be queer in someway, so this has been something I've been very much looking forward to seeing in interactive fiction spaces. Excited to read the whole story, I expect a lot of crying and bittersweetness but also the liberation of self autonomy. 

Love the whole cast so far - the different forms of grief - and MC's emotions are very relatable. It is hard to realize you're experiencing panic attacks when you've come to believe that you can't be vulnerable. Had a very similar realization myself when I was younger. I wonder if we will know how the MC died?

Very excited to read more. Really enjoy the theme of having to communicate without words, plus love scifi survival!

The closeness of love/passion as devouring, coming through beautifully. I am obsessed! Had to listen to Love Crime while reading, it just fit. 

Beautiful, immersive and intriguing. I have to ask where the music is from, did you compose it yourself? I really love the track, was humming to it the whole play time. I would love to able to listen to it outside of the game.

I love the demo so far! It's an interesting premise and I love your take on the whole superhero concept. The abilities aren't the usual stuff you see and their very clever! I'm especially interested in Voider, I wasn't expecting a POV from them. I'm wondering if they're maybe a possible love interest? Either way seems like we can build an interest relationship with them, and unless I understood incorrectly they knew our real name even though they hadn't seen our face. Matteo is definitely my favourite of the others so far, thank you for letting us spray them. Also Pierce and Eric are amazing.  Looking forward for more, good luck with writing!