Ahhh I’ve been looking forward to this so much and it’s GREAT. I’m in love with the “rivals” dynamic between these two. Page 23 where what Elethar says and what he wants are direct opposites just about killed me, so good.
Ahhh this was such a fun read, your characters are delightful and I can’t wait to see what happens next. I am a big fan of the “it’s just one lung, nbd” cyborg doctor.
