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A dollar? Awesome! It's very original and goes right to the MB list.

Bionicle masks!! sh*t just got real :D

I love The Dark Tower, nice inspiration,

It's a very handsome and cool fella. Good set of skills and nice ideas for the types of faces.

This deserves all stars. A  full fun generator. Really gooood art. 

Wow i didn't knew that armor, cool reference.

Weird, special and sweet :) the art is beautifull.

Good ideas everywhere!!! just what someone needs to extend the from scratch Pcs. 

Great perfomance on the idea and mechanics. Looks 90' niiiice!

A scratch to the face sheet. Perfect HOL adapted Borg with nice layout and humorous text everywhere.

Thanks a lot for the nice review! One of your fav? Happy to know!! :D if the players fail let it be trying doing something ridiculous, that was my idea.

The tone is excelent and the characters are super weird. A really nice set of rules to make an awesome desperate hex crawl dimension. The long list of books and the way of make random rooms are mindblowers.  Borges is involved in a Borg game!! Vamoo carajoo!!! (Lets f* Goo!!) I'm using this. 6/5

It's an awesome class, very nice approach to the creature. The part of "Once human but then you saw THe SUN" is great, just like all the other abilities.

Thanks a lot!  Is really nice to know that :D

Well played, good and funny ideas here. Just the handwriting make ir very hard to read. Everything else is accomplished.

A needle through the eye? Malicious and twisted!
Totally suggested for the players :)
Good work.

A perfect continuation of the first great adventure of the dying world.

The tone and ideas play very well and the art was necessarily grotesque and fitting. 5/5

It makes me anxious to know what the PCs might choose to do with Aldon's life and the dark rewards of this creature.

(You know what? f you Aldon)

This is very well writed. 
Gilded walkin skulls, yesssss. 
"if exposed to fire or extreme heat, they will shriek in agony and begin to tear away at their melting flesh"
Oh yesssss!!!

Good words and terrific art. The monster table is peak!

The art of the map is awseome (that croc seems to be really cool).

I like that misery at the end, after all the crazyness of this dungeon a misery still occurs, spicyng things up.
Thta spider can work perfectly in a Dark Souls game, i imaginated it as cool as that.

Excelent spark for the valley. Great art and writing to. 

All the options are well though and the skeletons are special for this storyline. My fav: the fancy coward. But the layout is prrrrfect! Those fading words and gray color.

Very cool art and mosnter. I need his hat and his flesh. 

Serial killer handwriting all the way. A lot to work for the GM but the essence of a fist fight in a very fuckedup place is tremendous! A TROLL??! Who bring a Troll to a fist fight? Sound like a good party to me.

Well explained, good idea, flawless mechanic.

It's so well damn writed. I felt in a prison reading it. 100% hell i'm not playing this game. Also, my players could try it and wish they could die quick.

Work totally fine for pirate borg or somethig near it. Full of mistery to spread. Good one!

This project goes somewhere very cool. I try to understand the zine but it looks good! Best wishes for this game.

Happy to serve! :) i can't read it neither x.x

Nice hook!! on the writing and the special attack. 

La verdad un juegardo con altos avances che. Lo logré terminar y me sorprendió todo lo logrado. Costó pero le agarré la mano jaja. Grande Walter!!

GRACIA AMEGOOO!

This says JINKS! in every sentence. Perfect for boiling things up. Got also 5 stars in the design.

Thanks for the nice words :) mission accomplished then. Good to know you like the recipe, it got messy, but I really want a player to be able to bring that monster to life and eat someone's arm XD.

Your welcome, thanks for the reply. :) it's a good motivation, it brought good content.

I can't think any other thing than just taking out the dragon at the right, and it still gonna look great. But i got a couple of examples if like: Lucifer of Eugene Delacroix for skills set from the Dragon of Sarkash, or any other public domain dragon that work in the background or even a small one next to the random tables.

The page already works, so is just details.

Become a cannibal. Shiiiit, i'd like to see that.

Nice writing. The encounter with this fella seems hard knuckle and i like it.

The quest seems to works wonderfully. The reward of the dragon are peak for the upcoming adventure, even  the suggestions for that one. I only think both arts don't look so good for me in the same sheet.  Althoug Herrera's art rocks, the public domain art works perfectly in that map too. 

Good work!

This is perfect and real creepy. Mix even better with Tania Herrero's "Sun-Scorched Symbiote".

Chaotickliy good. Pink Floys sh*ts its pants.

Good work!