Exceptional! Well executed story. Great tone and deep writing.
Full of emotion without a single line if dialogue.
Great story. Very Grim Dark.
Try to stick to a consistent POV.
Excellent story.
Good pacing, description and plot.
Congratulations!
Good ideas.
Consider POV. It should be clearer. Also consider some subtext in the dialogue. Leave some things unsaid but implied.
Great story. Nice pacing. Descriptive and clear. A hint on why Druuk was saved would have rounded the story off well.
