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Same on the Android, so I've been doing as many quests as possible to keep my number of days left high.

I loved this quick demo! I really can't wait to see where this project goes! The writing is hilarious, and the MC is actually likeable (as of now). Side note and slight spoiler, but having your title change from Narrator to The Hero after making that choice in the garage was a great little touch!! I'll have to replay and change my choice to see if I get labeled as The Villain or something similar.  After replaying, I realized my title changes from Narrating to (The Hero) after the scene at the movies with Maddison, not after making the choice in the garage. Apparently that was just when I first noticed the change. *facepalm*

A couple of things I noticed-

1. While the pink tampon pick up issue was fixed for the Android version, it's still a soft-lock for the web version.

2. IMO, the red return button within the menu screen (on both web version and Android) could be a bit bigger to allow for easier exiting of the menu- maybe 5-10%- because the button seems kind of hard to flick casually (maybe due to the hit box size).

3. You can't actually save on the final screen in the Android version where it says to save to continue with the next version since the controls at the bottom right seem to be locked. As such, I had to replay from a save I made after making it to Maddy's house and save as the Title Credits were ending before that screen popped up. I tried 2 more times from that save just to make sure I wasn't missing a hit box, but even if you turn on Skip from an earlier point it'll just keep trying to skip through that screen without allowing you to turn it off, so it's not just the menu icon that doesn't work on that screen.

Seriously, I love this game so much. I can't wait for the next release!!