Thank you for your thoughtful and constructive feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to read my game and share your insights.😊
I will fix the typo in the poem, thank you for catching that.
The difference between Actions and Moves is actually just an oversight, writing this game was quite a rush.
I agree that the Ritual could use more clarity and guidance. I will add some suggestions for alternative dice and ways to sync your speech. The dice thing was actually just a silly joke - or are there d9 (I think this hike doesn't fit the game's tone and probably will get cut)
You are right that there is a kink element to this game, and I should be more upfront about it. I will revise the introduction and marketing material to reflect that. I will also include more safety tools for players to use before and during the game.
I think I actually don't want this game to be played online anymore. It was an idea in the beginning but right now a I do not see anybody playing this game via vtt. Since the now deleted Reddit post is the only place where I mentioned online play i think this fixed itself. 🐟⚔️
Thank you again for your helpful comments. They will definitely improve my game.🙏