One of the best, well-fleshed out VN I've played in a while. Some writing mistakes here and there, but it doesn't take too much out of the story for me. Really excited for the next patch!
This is incredible so far, the art is pretty good, and the concept is very interesting. One thing that stands out is that some of the dialogue grammar needs a bit of cleaning up, but that's just a minor issue. Can't wait to see more of this!
The text animations are pretty smooth, the combat system seems pretty effective as well. Sounds could really amp up the immersion too. Pretty good so far, excited for the next update!