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I'm not very far into the book, but these are my thoughts so far, I will update as I go on.

I feel that this is novel has a lot of time and effort and passion put into it, so I say with a heavy heart... This game is bad. The art is decent at best, inconsistent and off putting at worst, with (unlicensed?) inconsistent real-life photos as backgrounds. The writing is awful, not the plot, as I do enjoy the story overall. The grammar is iffy and the pacing -oh my god the pacing- is so incredibly fast that I often had no idea what was happening. The story didn't leave itself anytime to dwel on anything; it felt like I was being hurdled through the novel at light speed. The characters aren't well defined, and aren't complex at all, they're generic archetypes that are a dime-a-dozen in any story. At the start I had no context as to what was happening and why, I didn't even know I was in a shipwreck until I was told, because the start of the story is vague, not only this, why am I staying in moonstray? Why am I not trying to get home? Do I have people to call, people to go back to? I haven't told anyone where I am, am I on a missing person's list? Am I technically an illegal immigrant? Nothing is explained! No, apparently I have retrograde amnesia, but I had no clue!

Despite all of this, I do enjoy this book, and I enjoy the characters; everything above is a personal nitpick that I hope you don't take as an attack. I see the potential, there is an amazing story here and I believe you have to power to write it, but stars, you mixed the mark. Three stars.

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Joiplay has never worked for me, with countless troubleshooting attempts and re-installs

I love this story, it's enlightened me, even. Its bittersweet, well, more just bitter, there is no happy ending, and there is no satisfying pay off, but it works perfectly as is.

The game as a game is great, well polished and the UI is lovley, keith has done it again.

"post soulcreek" 😞

Uhh, what? Wolf was wanted by the authorities and joined the Conway to escape, rené lied and said James was a bounty hunter that was playing the long con.

Is there a discord server?

The game is well put together and the art is nice. The grammar is iffy at points but that doesn't take away from the game. Over all it's very lovely and I'm excited to see where the story goes.  It is also fun to see something new and of high quality, as good VN's are few and far between.

Decades bro

Hey, so this is a really great VN and I would love to see more! The setting, more specifically the world it's based in is very interesting and I would love to see more of the protag and the world he lives in.

Also, I loved twinkle twinkle liquor star, I read it a few months ago and was really gripped by the story, I recommend both.

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What do the cheats even do

Where Android

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This visual novel is really great! I am thoroughly impressed by what you have been able to do in ren'py. I love the unique mechanics and I am hooked on the game, I'm also very excited to see where the story goes, and the story between Luc and Darius.

I encountered a bug trying to talk to tulemeni during 'halfway through second shift'. in her environment, the game breaks, and a ren'py error screen pops up. is there a place to report bugs?