Excellent work.
Moshibit
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Here is a small review:
I love how the game approaches its mechanics, the most important being that it invites players to abandon personal glory to collaboratively tell a story. The rules are perfect for the narrative to flow. It is important to highlight that Dextra does not have its own setting, but this is not a defect, it is its greatest strength, players and GM will have to build the world and populate it with its inhabitants and adventurers, a task that is facilitated by making everyone participate. Character creation is fast, fun and unexpected. If you like TTRPGs with light rules and in favor of narrative you should buy Dextra, you won't regret it.
Great job. Sorry for not leaving a comment and rating before, I don't usually give feedback, I was encouraged to do so when I saw your tweet about how you are discouraged by not having a good rating in the first four days after launch. I hope to see more of your work soon, mainly about Café Memoria Deux, cheer up and keep going.
You have already taken the most important step: starting and publishing your game. Take your time, projects require perseverance, continue at your own pace. Set your short and medium term goals. The concept of the game is good, I would like to know how each branch of the story continues. If necessary, write your script slowly and check constantly so that you identify bugs and don't waste time hunting down bugs later. Cheer up. I wish you and your project the best.
I got this error message in the new version:
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While loading <'Image' 'rachel mc_grope_butt_d3_v1_1.jpg'>:
File "game/Rachel_PS.rpy", line 3276, in <module>
IOError: Couldn't find file 'rachel mc_grope_butt_d3_v1_1.jpg'.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
The Headmaster 0.9.2public
Fri Dec 11 08:34:23 2020
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i got a exception message after repair the house in the exile:
```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/000window.rpy", line 95, in _window_auto_callback
_window_hide()
File "renpy/common/000window.rpy", line 85, in _window_hide
renpy.with_statement(trans)
Exception: Required parameter lead_popup_text has no value.
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Champion of Realms 0.31
Wed Nov 18 08:29:07 2020
```
I do not know exactly how the dynamics of the game work, I imagine that there is an order to perform the actions or you use a score to advance, making the score visible with numbers or with a bar will not make the game difficult. I think the best thing you can do is indicate with some particles the moment that you can perform a more daring action, make some hearts appear for a small moment. You can do this in the easiest route, so that the player understands how the dynamics of the game work. I can't think of a better way to make it intuitive without losing difficulty.
Focus on only one couple at a time, working with all of them will slow your progress, develop the characters, correct the bugs, foreplay scenes cannot be completed. It was hard for me to discover what the dynamics of the game were, it was a bit long not to be able to advance but there is logic in it, but after several attempts I managed to advance. I look forward to your next update