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I can't overstate how happy I am with this story and the execution of... all of it! I'll be dropping by again with some well earned gold, one day in a not too distant future. :)

I really like how this manages to stay interesting+fun and relatively normal compared to some of the other similar VNs on this site. It keeps the immersion in the story well. Excited to see it completed! 

Excited enough to report that:

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Vincents clothes bug out during the barn scene, when I picked that MC is not interested in him, but still go to the barn. Also in the Arcade I get the dialogue about him having an arcade-card at the beginning of every different game, and in the beginning of the scene.

I hope this helps, and happy coding! :D

This was cute, and I wouldn't change a thing, even though the academic scores were tough to work with X)

I wanna keep the comments coming to make sure we get this funded! Looking forward to seeing this mystery unfolding and the monster fights I'm sure will be there! 

Fun to read chap 2! Looking forward to get to know the witches' society a bit better ^_^

Yesss, their retractable eyes are my favorite! :D

Started playing because of the snail and general vibes. Got so much more than I bargained for. Thank you and wow! ❤️

Glad to hear it! ^_^

This one was fun and I enjoyed it a lot! I'd consider it canon for my read of the books ^_^

Also some nametags in Z's story have typos. Thought you'd like to know :)

Example:

Enjoying the heck out of this! 

Spoilers below.

Just thought I'd drop a couple of... parts where I don't think the scene lined up in how it leads into the next? Where MC "dropped the knife" I didn't think they were still holding on to (pic 1 leading into pic 2).

And also a part where the first paragraphs seemed to be from a different story route. I circled the part I believe to be the start of the page, and question-marked the ones I.... questioned ;) (pic 3).

 If this is unhelpful, feel free to tell me so. Sometimes an artful decision aren't what we'd expect as readers. :)

Thank you for sharing this chapter!

Really interesting MC. Love the mystery of guessing what is going on!

Also thought I'd contribute with a typo I found. Looking forward to the next chapter!