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awesome ty for your reply

well this certainly wasnt my usual type of game, i tend to enjoy more choices of actions in my games.  with that said i still found this to be a fun story to just pass some time with.

I NEED more yandere Kathryn moments that shits just to damn good.

i certainly noticed the quality of the sex scenes and the story writing improved as i played the game further and further.   just like anything else in life you get better at it the more you do it.

with all that said thank you for putting this out here for free, so that us poorer bastards of the internet can have some fun.

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im certainly looking forward to chapter 2 mainly just because i wanna see Kat lose her shit when she finds out about Triss

well finally thought id give this game a go.  all and all it was pretty ok.  i found the sex scenes to be pretty entertaining and the story was not to bad either.

spoilers below so read at own risk

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I like that there is Hero/Dark paths available and they are labeled as such

I like that there is various women to be had with various body types

I like that there is lots of different locations to visit.

I like that the choices you make can affect how the womens dialogue changes.

I like the ingame guide/hints thingy as it tells you where to go to get more events

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The Kitchen in the House we buy from the Mayor,  OMG to much red and the green bowls hurt the eyes

I didnt like how interconnected everybody is, i found it to be annoying that in order to progress Girl A to path Y,  Girl S had to be at stage U and Girl O had to be at stage J.  felt like that really killed the flow of the story to have to suddenly start progressing a completely different girl, just so i could go back and finish the one i was working on.

=====  On that note i had a weird issue happen with Emily/Sophie/Lilly  some how i had managed to very early in the game rescue Sophie from her father and was rewarded with sex from Lilly before i had ever been in her house or knew who in the fuck she even was,  i must admit that through me for a loop and a half.

I didnt like any of the choices from Nani story.  Resetting her seemed risky, i sure as hell wasnt going to give her to that Dr Emma, so i was forced to sell one of my toys >=(.   I wasnt horribly attached to her emotionally, i just dont like sharing my toys even if they are broken.  Im hoping at some point we can buy her back as a nanny for all the babies we are going to be having.

I didnt like that there wasnt many options to move time forward on the map screen or really in general,  we need to be able to skip ahead

yes i know its nitpicky, but there was a sex scene with Lisa (The Nurse) where she is on top and she's going up so high our pecker keeps going out of her vajayjay  graphically that just looks weird,  unless your setting us up from some queefing fetish type stuff later in the game, might wanna look into fixing that, but hey im not here to judge some guys are into the whole pussy farting thing.

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so with all that said i guess thats it for now,  Thank you for putting this game out here for free, so that us poorer bastards of the internet can still have some fun.  i hope you found my comments to be constructive and not insulting.

thanks for the recs i found all those games to be pretty damn fun

this was pretty damn fun 

(spoilers ahead read at own risk)

It started out rocky as i didnt like the initial navigation around the ship but once the map was opened up and we could warp around the ship that made the game a LOT better.  I also enjoyed all the little (pick me up) items scattered all around the ship at different times of day to unlock gallery images.   kinda wished that'd been mentioned earlier in the game though lol

i also enjoyed the story as the game progressed it seemed to have gotten better and better.   I was able to see the MC starting to gain confindence in himself and his actions, it just felt like there was some growth there to me.

initially Nyx straight pissed me off with how her interactions was so one-sided but as the game progressed and the tables was able to be turned i found myself actually looking forward to our next interaction,  so good job on that as it gives people the option for which way they want their kink to go

Zara  ZOMG i had no idea i wanted a dragon woman,  i'll admit their relationship feels hugely rushed would have been nice to spend more time there to kinda build it up so it didnt feel so rushed but meh fuck it i'll take it.  i want some more dragon mama time.  as towards the end of this update 3.6d i found their interactions to be heartwarming and meaningful.  yes i went the full supportive daddy route sue meh

It would be nice to have a explaniation on what affection actually effects if anything at all.   first time i seen that pop up on the screen i was like "huh whats this ?"  if affection does to turn out to actually matter what methods will we have to raise it?, as ive noticed that once you do a scene/event once you no longer get points for it.

Alex,  we get to gut him when?  at first i felt kinda bad for the guy as it would suck so badly to be that far out into space and to feel what i think was him just feeling alone and isolated.   but towards the end of 3.6d and the shit he pulled my sympathy went out the window faster then a condom wrapper at a porn convention.  /rant mode on  like seriously dude (Alex) you need to just die.  i still dont understand where all his anger and negetivity came from.   hell i even tried to apologize and the fucker still went off on me, fuck him, fuck his mom, and fuck his dad too.  /rant mode off

i also enjoyed the sex scenes but not just because of the sex.  it was all the attention to detail that was put into them, like i could feel the amount of work to make them what they are.  the eye movements, the eye lids, how the bodies moved in what seemed to be more realistic manner be it their hands legs hips stomachs,  how the flesh seemed to actually contort and plump/squish around.  from the jiggle of the breasts to the jiggle of the asses and thighs.  there is no doubt a FUCK TON (no pun intended) of work went into making those scenes and it shows,  you should certainly be proud of those scenes later on in the game.  specially the cute silver dress mode Noel and the ear-slut Nyx scenes.  so many people put elves in their games and never do jack shit with the ears.  but in this one you can actually see the fingers moving on the ears and rubbing them an what nots.  so again seriously good job on all that shit.

All in all i had a pretty damn good time playing your game.  thank you for putting out here for free for us poorer bastards of the internet to play.   sorry i have no money i can give you and all i have to offer is just feedback on what i did and didnt enjoy about it.

HAHAHA this is some funny shit man.  that said i want mah CHUMEE update!!!  not going to lie never really been a huge fan of goblin pussy but gosh damn that sweet little spitfire argh!!! she just makes you wanna break your dick off in her sweet little green ass

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man its going to be fucking epic when her and MC meet up again for the first time thats the update im waiting for, i romanced her over the elf Elise, thought id try something different and fuck all am i glad i did.  some how that green little cocksleeve wormed her way into my fucking heart

for me this one was pretty fun, did everything with everybody that possible as far as i know at this stage of release

at times it did feel a bit grindish though but then again i raised almost all stats to 300+ so yeah that was probably my own fault

most of the girls stories were some what entertaining.

the only story that kicked me in the dick is Maxy/Mary storyline as you dont typically find that combo in these types of games very often so thumbs up for that one. and NO it didnt make me cry, my eyes was just sweating. now i just need a positive way to resolve it lol

dont get me wrong im glad its there, but i never understood why the bar was placed on the 2nd floor instead of just expanding the 1st floor.  yes i myself have been to a many a bar that was in the basement of a eating establishment and i never understood the logic of mixing stairs and booze lol

im glad that taking showers with the girls doesnt eat up action times thumbs up for that

why do the women keep moving around in the womens info screen? i never understood why they do that

id like to see the option to add a girl to a favorites type setting so that way her icon would just appear on the screen under the times of day and we could click that for quick info to progress the girls story such as when and where to meet her

would like to see more 3p action and maybe some 4p 5p type stuff,  i would also like to see the option of getting blow jobs from more girls, also the ability to eat them out, cause yeah pussy is delicious shoot meh.

let people know they can go run at the beach in the mornings and evenings to raise fitness,  i kept waiting for a girl to give me that option,  yes Yui and Layla do that but you gotta go into their stories a bit before you can, mean while you can just go the library on day 1 and pick up a book for easy points in everything else

Mary's learn X/X/X/X i think instead of something random how about just giving 1 point in all each time you do hers?  i wouldnt call it and OCD but i REALLY REALLY like to keep my stats even and balanced and i found that to be somewhat of a pain in the ass lol

is the love/depravity system still a work in progress? cause there was times id get like 3 4 or 5 hearts be it red or purple then go into the girls screens and see that their hearts be it red of purple wasnt raised very much or even at all

any who thats about all i could think of for the things i noticed while playing the game.  sorry i dont have any money to give you and all i can give is just feed back.  thanks again for making this a free game that us poorer bastards of the internet can play for free

so what to say about this one.  HA HA HA 

1.  I need more interactions between the MC and Ami fucking hell their banter is glorious. i love their mental and verbal conversations during sex and bloody hell just in general

2.  When i first seen Kate i was like who the fuck is this and why is she here, after the end of the current update i was like OH FUCK YES!!  and i totally agree with Ami, we need her in our harem.

3.  i felt like a HUGE IDIOT when ami was first appeared cause i was like how the fuck did she come up with that name,  then i finally seen it when i seen how it was the end of what she is and was OH FUCK how did i miss that.

4.  I loved the cat fight between Liz and Helen towards the end that fantastic and i wanna see more of their banter with each other, watching those 2 trying to assert dominance like that was just awesome

5.  Id like to see him be more creative with his powers, and to use them more.  It did feel kinda let downish as he's supposed to be a pervert but aside from a few things here and there he really didnt do much with them.   Maybe a power suggestion could be that since pheramones are released in sweat maybe he needs to figure out that when he's nervious to make his sweat smell more arousing to the girls and make them go into heat,  cause if they suddenly become all hot an bothered/love struck then they wont be able to sink their teeth into his ass as much. 

6.  He needs to start using his powers more in general, he has the powers to read minds, increase pleasure through touch and shigigami only knows what else, yes that pun was intended =).  i only say this cause if he truly wants a harem then he's going to have to "man the fuck up" and stop being so reactive and become a more proactive kinda person,  now given his previous life and experience his current mentality and ways of doing things have been what i would expect to some degree.  but im really hoping to see some character progression out of him in the later releases

7.  I liked how the sex scenes allowed for different angles and PoV's so that way (we the players) could enjoy which ever angles we enjoyed the most

8.  Could we get some kinda on screen indicator for what our actions do to affect love/corup  if i was to be honest i found that part of the GUI to be some what burdensome  mainly cause i had to constantly bet hitting the arrow key in the later stages of the game to see what my choices affected.  Lots of games use a phone but i wouldnt want to see that in this as i dont think it would fit as well since this has a more paranormal feel to it.  maybe shrink down the sizes of the pictures so that they can all fit on just one page?  our possibly have the screen flash Light blue for love choices and redish/pinkish for corruption choices? maybe have him use his powers in his eyes so that he can see their love/corup numbers above the girls heads activated by using the middle mouse button? so that way it wouldnt be on ALL the time and break the immersion but would still give us quick access to the important info we need kinda thing?  sorry i dont have better ideas as im just spit balling here.   

9.  and finally the last thing i'll say,  im sorry so truly sorry i have no money and the only thing i can offer you is what i feel is constructive feedback about how i played your game an the things i liked and didnt like about it.  thank you for putting it out here for free for us poorer people of the internet to enjoy

man this one sure turned around pretty damn quickly for me.  not going to lie was getting kinda bored with all the school type stuff and what nots.  was starting to feel like i was playing Being a DiK  (once was enough for me on that one) and was starting to lose interest.  but i pushed on through to the end of 2.0 and WOW just fucking wow am i glad i did.  gimmeh dat mystery, gimmeh dat conspiracy oh and umm i'll take some boobies/milf action on the side please =)  

thanks a ton for making this game free to play for us poorer bastards of the internet to enjoy 

PS.  thanks for the easy to find walkthroughs so that we can play it first without then check the walkthroughs to see where we (fucked up) no pun intended 

Man what a game this was.   If i was to be completely honest i expected this game to suck, it is a porn game after all.  but fuck all was i pleasantly surprised.  i played through the game twice once as the nice guy an the other as the asshole.  but even with playing through the game twice i still found the stories of the girls to be engaging and entertaining.

I enjoyed Lin's progression and character growth wont say more as i dont wanna spoil.  all i'll say is FREEDOM (Brave Heart Style) Babbies NAO!!!

I enjoyed Kali's story going from a borderline neat to having goals

I enjoyed Ashley's progression and character growth.  her story hits VERY close to home i'll just leave it at that.   it was very enjoyable to watch her change and grow.   Ashley babbies when????

Maria's was just awesome in lots of various ways.  her story made me want to rage but not because it sucked.  all i could think of at the end of it was BLOOD for the blood god and bones for the skull throne.

Android (Annie_01)  was a good laugh.  not sure how her story will play out.  I certainly hope the MC is able to do something to rein her in, he's certainly off to a good start.

Felecity & Emma (Kitty Slut & Dog Whore)  while im sure many will sympathize with their story.  I wont lie i was unable to.  maybe its cause i didnt do them till close to the very end of the game with both play throughs, but i just couldnt do it.   i openly confess that i just dont like them and i also confess its most likely due to my own personal biases and having to deal with people like them in my own life.  

Autumn not much to say on her.  at times she pissed me smooth the fuck off and at others i felt somewhat sorry for her.  it was honestly a weird feeling.

Ellen (the receptionist) OMFG more MILF scenes when???  like seriously she's sexxa as fuck.   why she haz noe dungeon scenes!!??!!111.  i dont count her as a side chick the MC has to many interactions with her an she has to many interactions with the plot of the girls to be considered just that.  she's like in that weird spot of inbetween a main/side girl

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My personal Favorite is Moon.   in all the images we never see the tops of her ears they're always magically tucked into her hair.  is she a secret elf?  her back story just seem suspect to me.  with the whole jungle/mountain living an all that jazz.  I could totally see her being another Maria.

Nia/Sylvia/Ann/Penni/Jin they was all fun.   was sad to see Jin leave the dungeon though.  i look forward to more content for them being released.

love the Nia/Sylvia couch scene (the 3rd option) in the sanctuary i confess that i probably watched that way more times then i should have.   wont say why (dont wanna spoil) but i found the comedy of it to truly entertaining.

I also love how Nia reacts when you make her call you "Daddy" thats just fantastic

Vanessa just irritates the every living hell out of me.  i cant explain it very well but she just does.  She reminds me of another Felecity or something very similar to her.

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                                 Things I liked or would like to see

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as already mentioned the story is really really solid for a porn game.  good job on that, keep it up.

The Harem is REALLY starting to get large,  might need to give Maria and Android (Annie-01)  some strap-ons not really into the whole futa thing so dont really wanna see a character with a swinging cock all the time.  nor do i really wanna see a cock flopping and swinging around on the screen during scenes where it be the catcher instead of the pitcher.  but if it must be done hopefully we'll have the option to view or not view that kinda content. 

We need an easier way to track side-event triggers,  while some random/surprise content is always nice.   they just seem to buggered up at the moment.  maybe change the info button screen to show small picture icons of the girls and side girls.  and when a event with those girls is up or available have it light up then make it clickable and have it tell us when and where to be to see or make X event happen.  yes i understand that coding all that would probably be a horrid headache, but i really think it would improve the game flow of the game significantly.

We need a way of seeing what friendship level is needed to unlock events for the main girls.  take Maria for instance, i forget what lvl you cap out on but at a certain lvl you all of a sudden need X friendship level with Autumn in order to continue Maria's Story.  Maybe instead of just telling us we need to raise friendship with X girl maybe put it on the talk button.  make it change to (Need X friendship with X girl)  when we reach those instances.  that would certainly remove some frustration while playing through the game.  

I would like to see more Orgy type events with all the girls,  i truly enjoyed the scenes with maria/lin/ash whens Lins lust gets semi high.

I would like more choking/head holding events Lins max lust and kali's last exhibition scenes are damn nice.  maybe add a choking fetish to one of the girls and scenes that would go along with it.   Lin certainly seems to like it,  I could see either Kali/Lacie being into that as well as maybe Emma (Dog Whore) as she seems to like it rough as all hell

I would like to see a Drow (judge mez i dunt kares)  that one event with that one was hawt as hell, she is tall as fuck the harem needs some of that kinda sexiness.

Info on what the stats on the right of the screen mean on the info X girl tabs and how to raise them.   I always have a hell of a time getting Lins *Cum Slut* stat into the yellow letters it seems not many events effect that.  like have a little window that pops up as you hover over it with the info and events that raise it

Have the last event in exhibitionism raise 3 stats for all girls not just a few  Aff/Obi  Slut Exhi for the last one for all would be very nice as it levels a lot of stats at once.

More options for wakeup or the ability to pick and choose our personal favorites for the task

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                                            Things I didnt like

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Money -- in the early stages of the game you almost cant earn it fast enough,  but at a certain point it becomes almost completely worthless.  in my last play through i ended the game at day 613 i think it was and had almost $40,000 an some change just sitting there doing fuck all nothing (on a side note i got Lin's Slutiness to over 1,000 =), )  Maybe we need the ability to either pay Jin/Ellen to train the girls in the dungeon as a money sink?  with a camera in there so we can view the recordings for later?

Unable to pick or set up auto sleep for sleeping partners at the end of the day it just feels like its been either not fully implemented or been forgotten about and that makes me sad

There is nothing in the options that tells us what keyboard commands do or if keyboard commands are even implemented

There is nothing that tells us in the options what the options do or what they effect

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                                                        Closing

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All and all i found this game to be very fun and entertaining,  I thank you for putting it out here for free, for us literal poor bastards to play for free on the internet.   I hope you found my criticism to be of the proper kind.   as it wasnt my intention to be negative nor was it done in an effort to offend nor to try and tear you down.   thanks again for all the time and effort you've put into this game.  i made this account on this site just today just so that i could post my thoughts on your game.