I like the action, and the suspense! Great job!
Good observation - thanks
I appreciate your feedback!
Thank you!
Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.
Great story line - one of the best for sure!
I enjoyed this. Great work!
Great job! One of the best for sure!
Good suspense and story line. I enjoyed it!
Outstanding! Thanks for the great entry!
Great job -really interesting!
Nice work!
Great job! I enjoyed it.
Good development of personalities. Great flow of story line. Nice work.
Really good flow. Nice job!
Good work - I like the suspense.
Fun story - the characters are very likeable. I like the imagination and creativity.
