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Of course! I hope it didn't sound too harsh, the game looks very promising and I already love Ren with all my heart. Can't wait for chapter three~

This game is really good! It's a bit slow at the start, but as soon as you choose which route you want to pursue, wow, I didn't even notice the time going by. I also really like how each route is unique and distinct from another. They all are their own stories and not just small variations from each other. I was drawn by Ren from the start; and so far is route has not disappoint ;) Just one thing, the wording is sometimes a bit hard to read and not really clear. Some dialogues feel stiff and unatural, there are also grammar mistakes (using past tense and present tense in the same sentence). I totally understand if English is not your first language (it's not mine either), I just wanted to let you know, because this game is really good, and it's a shame that reading it is so hard. Also maybe add a feature to make the text seem bigger?