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Thank you! I'm looking to narrate the stories from this jam so people can get a different angle on the entries but in the future I might narrate more stories. Do let me know when you've completed your rewrite either here or on discord, I'm Maybemax on the opr server :)

I'm glad you liked it haha, there's a couple places where I think I could improve but I wanted to get this up. It's one of my favourites!

And ofc you can link to it :)

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course.

Here you go! 

I narrated this story on YouTube, check it out :) 

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course. And congrats on getting into the top five!

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course. And congrats on getting into the top ten!

Oh that's awesome! I'll let you know when it's up :)

Thank you! I'll let you know when it's up :)

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course.

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course.

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course.

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course.

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course. And congrats on second place!

Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course. And congrats on first place!

Thank you! I do enjoy inflicting a little emotional damage hehe~

Thank you so much!

Thank you! Yes, the battle does not end even after the last shot is fired, unfortunately.

Thank you, yes I struggled to keep it below a thousand and have it make sense haha. Glad you enjoyed it anyway!

If nothing else, dad's cheesecake will ease the pain at least. Thank you for reading!

Thank you, yes that's exactly what I wanted to portray. I think we all have these moments of conflicting feelings that are hard to talk about so I hoped this would speak to many people.

Thank you! For some reason I like when I can be sad about the deaths of my toy soldiers ^^"

Thank you, that's always the best praise <3

Having somehow managed to read every single story in this jam, I can confidently say, yours is my favourite! It hits the right spot between fantasy and reality for me, between concrete and abstract, between political and personal. Grimdark without the spectacle. Love this shit.

I like your perspective. The story could improve from a little show don't tell but on the whole it was very thought provoking. Kudos!

Does Mary know what red is? This story is a great illustration of a philosophical puzzle. I'm not sure about the significance of the ending but perhaps it isn't for to know. Either way, great story!

Really interesting, a perfect setup for a perfect delivery. Maybe too perfect but that's in the realm of philosophy. I had a lot of fun reading this!

Very interesting, definitely needs paragraphs but really interesting world you're building!

Ooooh, drama. I do love me a good vampire fic. Solid entry!

Spooky, moody, great. Very unique!

Gizhundheit! Marvellous! And the image of the exploding whale carcass in the mood board is *chef's kiss* Though I have questions about humans and demons working together so casually, this was a very enjoyable read!

A really gutsy extended action scene, a dramatic ending, the question "what was it worth" lingering after this battle, really cool story! 

The OSHS report for this one must be wild. All kidding aside, this was great and mysterious. Too mysterious perhaps? Or not mysterious enough? It's impossible to say. What I know is that I had a great time.

Nice take on the classic David v Goliath story. Bartolo's prediction seemed to be quite close to the actual solution which weakens the finale but I love the characters voices and the general flow. Simple, and clean.

Thank you, as a writer I am very familiar with the feeling of not being able to find the right words so I put all that energy into this story.

The theme is really shining in this one! The pacing was a little slow around the middle but a nice little twist at the end, really playing with the idea of impossibility. Great story!

That was a nice little scene! Sometimes I think you don't have to spell things out so much, the reader can sense Chibdik's fear when his hand is shaking, for example. I loved the characters though and they have a great dynamic. Would love to read more about them!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Rats rats rats! I love to see the different varieties of Rat working together and not being constrained by stereotypes! This touches upon some core aspects of Ratmen lore in a really human way and though this feels more like the setup for something larger, I love the little glimpse we get into this world of former lab subjects trying to scrape together whatever form of civilisation they can. Great stuff!

The only DAOU story I've seen so far and a lovely one at that. The theme didn't shine as much in this story but I loved the pacing and the characters!