I love the looping of the narrative! The overall mood of the game is like a strange mysterious dream and the looping made it more like a dream that keeps going. I also like the font, it sort of make the whole narrative of the game like a written letter.
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I like the plot you wrote for the game. It is very clear and makes me want to explore further about the story of the character. I also really love the unexpected outcomes to some of the decisions, such as popping out random emojis. I think it makes the game more comprehensive and is like actually on a quest with surprises.
I love the intro narrative. Instead of directly starting the main gambling part, the intro help to clarify the settings and immediately tells me it is more of a violent and bloody (in a good way) game. I also really like how you play with the fading sentences. I can almost imagine an inner voice screaming hard and losing its voice. I think the logic of the gambling part can be more sorted out, how the number rolled out reflects to the money.
I really like the mood setup for the game. I think it is amazing to have the words in animated movements that corresponds to the actions. Such as you have "push" sliding and "flashlight" flashing. I think those designs made the narrative more engaging and interactive. I think some of the choices can be more linked. Such as how the photos link to the final mistery.