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Oh, another one of those guys who works on two games at the same time so he can try and collect subs for both them together.  Just work on one project at a time dude and stop stringing out people pocket books.

Jin is many things, but there is one thing he is the undisputed Master of.

This guy could talk himself out of more sex than anyone I know or have ever known.  Every time a girl wants some type of sexual encounter he has some type of comment that gives the girl an instant reason to just say, "Yah know what, let's just forget it".

Example: 

Hazel "Now i'm even hornier and we've bonded over shrimp cookies, so I think it's time we go to the bedroom and you fuck the shit outa me."

Jin "How do you know i'd be up for that?"

If I was Hazel i'd just look at him and his dumb face and say, "Yea, your probably not,  just forget it.  You can go."

Agreed.  Are you trying to add words for the sake of having a higher word count?  (Something I wonder often while reading this)

Also, I'm not far, but I hope the MC makes Ikari suffer.

Can you make Girl #3 a regular, she looks like she's a real firecracker.   Also, I like the way she imposes her sexual presence on Yui.  

I read other VN's that have huge updates every 30-45 days, one i'm thinking about in particular has Lessons and is an A+ product.  I hope your paying the dev still because he needs people like you.

But it's super simple for the Dev to prove me wrong. 

Dead in development.

0.09 came out a year and a half ago.

Too bad, had an interesting premise.