Hello, dear author.
I want to thank you for the wonderful story.
The art, music and characters are marvelous. If I could give you 10 stars, I would.
Maybe you would consider releasing the game on Steam?
Also, If I may, I want to point out some game mechanics that leave me kinda frustrated. It’s about choices. So, some of them give +points in relationships, but several of them are too vague that a new reader must be Nostradamus to pinpoint them.
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Examples:
Ray +10
“Invite him in”
“(be honest) I find them kinda...uncomfortable”
“Here’s some coffee before you go”
These choices are neat and clear because you care about the character and want to be honest with him.
But
“What about him?” and “...really?” (+10)
I can’t really say what the difference is. Why the one gives you points and the other is not.
I wish authors stopped that practice “guess what the right choice is here, buddy!”