Some feedback, please discard if not relevant.
A straight female MC (and maybe gay men?) has a disadvantage because there are already the two obvious couples from the start (a little off-putting, if I might say, but beggars can't be choosers)
Quick solution #1: make Kalea gender-selectable
Quick solution #2: give players an opportunity to make a deal with Ros (Mc's motivation could be pragmatic, not romantic)
Quick solution #3: if a player wins an advantage, they could choose someone for a roommate. Because right now it's kind of strange this decision is not coming from a player but the two strangers near the end.
Quick question - why Prince Eric ratted out a MC eventually? There was no opportunity to change the location of the suitcase. Low. Really low. And no fun