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Some feedback, please discard if not relevant.

A straight female MC (and maybe gay men?) has a disadvantage because there are already the two obvious couples from the start (a little off-putting, if I might say, but beggars can't be choosers)

Quick solution #1: make Kalea gender-selectable

Quick solution #2: give players an opportunity to make a deal with Ros (Mc's motivation could be pragmatic, not romantic)

Quick solution #3: if a player wins an advantage, they could choose someone for a roommate. Because right now it's kind of strange this decision is not coming from a player but the two strangers near the end.

Quick question - why Prince Eric ratted out a MC eventually? There was no opportunity to change the location of the suitcase. Low. Really low. And no fun

The game is already a masterpiece. Please, don't be sorry and take care of yourself!

Full steam dlc with the butterfly head guy wheennn? :D

Hello, dear author. 

I want to thank you for the wonderful story. 

The art, music and characters are marvelous. If I could give you 10 stars, I would. 

Maybe you would consider releasing the game on Steam?

Also, If I may, I want to point out some game mechanics that leave me kinda frustrated. It’s about choices. So, some of them give +points in relationships, but several of them are too vague that a new reader must be Nostradamus to pinpoint them. 

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Examples:

Ray +10 

“Invite him in”

“(be honest) I find them kinda...uncomfortable”

“Here’s some coffee before you go”

These choices are neat and clear because you care about the character and want to be honest with him.

But

“What about him?” and “...really?” (+10)

I can’t really say what the difference is. Why the one gives you points and the other is not. 

I wish authors stopped that practice “guess what the right choice is here, buddy!”

dat feel when a dm forced you to roll dice just to mess with your character and you rolled a natural 1

"You had wet the bed again."

okay...

Yay! Thank you.

Wow. How could I miss it? 
I’m a fan of lowlife-badass MCs and underworld/rough life vibes. There are not so many decent IFs about thefts, heists, cons, espionage and infiltration.
I’m so smitten with your game. The story, atmosphere and characters are great. Truly a hidden gem. Strange there are so little comments.

Красиво, интересно, но мало.