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That's funny, because your work reminded me of Katawa Shoujo. :)  A friend recommended it to me and I expected absolutely nothing, and though I ended up caring for many of the characters, what struck me the most was that it gave me a desire to live.

Murmur reminds me of Katawa Shoujo because it has been giving me that same desire to live. I hope it doesn't sound bad, it's just like Sophie sort of said, I have a need to escape the mundane.

I actually didn't even consider that this could be your first project.

I will obviously be following your progress and waiting for updates!  Cheers!

I have finished what there is of the story two days ago and, this is such a weeb thing to say but, I'm in love with Shinigami. In the sense that she will randomly pop in my mind many times a day and thinking about her feels so good.  I don't recall having ever felt "in love" for a fictional character. She was extremely hot before, but her apology to Sophie and what it entails for the future of the story gave depth to everything that she ever does and it made me love her.

I'm awed at how you can make her seem so powerful, attractive, dominant, yet wholly realistic with a good heart that can subtly get hurt.

I'm also eager to see more of the power games between Kate, Helen and Liz.

Also, Sophie absolutely, brutally melted my heart!  Which makes me feel guilty for gushing over Shinigami like that. Now I understand how useful and powerful a good date can be...

A small detail that caught my attention and that I like very much is that sometimes the characters' facial expressions are considered sufficient for an answer, and they truly are. Those expressions are also well made throughout the story. I appreciate the effort you have put on those.

I came to write all this because I had been pacing around, wondering how anyone can write characters that could cause such deep feelings as Shinigami and Sophie have done for me. What someone has to be like to be able to write these characters.  I don't think I should expect an answer to that and my intention is only to show my appreciation for your work.

You are an amazing writer. Thank you so much.

I have also been wondering if there are any other stories you have written and wouldn't mind sharing!