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This novel could blackpill a suffragette. And worst of all, it's a *love* story. It's the gooner version of Pride and Prejudice. It's outstanding.

(Chapter 1) A great start so far. The opening scenes set a fantastic tone of action and suspense, a faster pacing for a faster story compared to their last work (Turning the Page). 

Whoever tried to tank the ratings so early in development, with the quality that's been shown, was just ill-intentioned. This one is really promising!

I wasn't aware that you were still updating this game, I was wondering if you were about to launch anything new. So time for a replay while I wait for your next stories with bated breath 🤭 (fingers crossed that it happens!)

Repeatables that increase points up to a capped amount may be the optimal choice, since I'm guessing most people will want to "upgrade" from reluctant to eager path (unless they are heavily role-playing and self-inserting, imagine that, how crazy, haha...ah...) But we'll see, we'll see 👀

(Review: 5 Stars)

I was expecting this one to be a short, decent but forgettable read, another Twine game among many. 

Boy was I wrong. The story throws you in the thick of it from the start, then picks and matches the pieces together the longer you read; it is absurdly engaging. The art is scarce but GORGEOUS. And even more astonishing, the game keeps you BUSY, hard enough to keep your brain working without grinding or mindlessly clicking forward. 

What an insane read, effing fantastic.

(Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong or outdated!) 

The threshold mechanic has the (intended?) effect of increasingly softlocking you towards the path you pick in your early choices. Like, if you go through a few reluctant choices, you can barely dial things up later on, and viceversa.

I think it works for continuity's sake, I'm totally ok with doing several runs of the game. But maybe I want my darling to really explode out of their shell, or have a sudden bout of shyness? ;3 

Could be cool to add a cheat mode to be able to pick the scene variant you wanna read. Maybe a 'New Game+'?

FYI, transgender NPC follow the same default when created, girls have a P, guys have a V. As far as I know only the protagonist can have more options to customize their body/gender at the moment.

Thanks! It's been a while since I played, but I remember I loved what was already there, so I made the jump to support. Stay strong! <3

I joined the 5$ tier Patreon this November the 26th and going through the devlog I'm not sure if I need to pay for the patreon version aside of the pledge or if pledging even now gives access to the current version.

I think people are expecting a more 'realistic' experience with this game. I welcome the inclusion as a trans woman myself! 

But also... The clinic is been standing there for a while and it's in dire need of content, just saying.....

The real fantasy... owning property....

'They hated gardenboy because He told them the truth'

Thanks! Hatefuck sounds cool but I'm also trying to see if there's a way to bully back/turn tables. Maybe it's not implemented yet

If Dominance appears it means they are dominating you, while Submission would mean you're the dominant part in the relationship, right? I've seen the dominant bar appearing in bullies/rival relationships and it was a bit confusing