I wish there was a way I could DM you, lol, I don't often meet people who share my opinions on writing online, I feel like I come across too high and mighty, haha.
I'm Mimxism on discord if you'd like to chat more, got a girl with black hair in dark pink as my pfp.
In part, I think I would have been more okay with the bitter sweet endings if the pacing were different, or the like.
As it is, I'm honestly just...well, disappointed.