I liked the game, even with the lack of audio, but I only had two sticking points with the plot. The first point is that everybody can end up living with you on Belugio except Megan, I'm not sure why she was left out even if you slept with her both times and her final screen basically just says you decided to forget about her. As for the second and most disappointing point, if you go the Dom route with Bella it locks you out of her getting pregnant. I feel like there should be options such as; when she fully commits to your dom/sub relationship with the ring (not the engagement ring) that putting a baby in her either shows your power over her ("your body belongs to me and this will prove just how devoted you are") or that you truly love her ("while I love to use your body as I see fit I still love you and want to start a family with you"), or that if you're on the pregnant harem route Bella (or whatever other girl, if you've got 3/4 pregnant) brings up the topic that they also want to be pregnant.
Edit: Iris might also be a pregnancy option only because she's older and Justin never sleeps with her so there's no point for her to be on the pill and condoms don't exist in these games. I'm not sure about any of the other girls getting knocked up; Riley is smart enough to be on the pill, narratively I can't think of a way for Nia or Rebeca to get pregnant unless you creampie them and going back to Belugio results in the surprise that they are pregnant, Alina and Ana are active enough that they'd know to stay on the pill, and Sasha, Sabine, and Miley might be too long of a time between your escapades and the end for them to still be pregnant.