As a long-time fan of the mascwoman/femman dynamic, I’m happy to see you're giving it attention. The art looks great, and I especially liked the dialogue window and overall UI, simple, but tasteful. The writing is solid as well, the flow feels natural.
The only thing I’d change is the music. It doesn’t really fit a visual novel soundtrack, as it fails to convey the intended atmosphere. I actually ended up turning it off. Even just removing the beat would improve it.
In conclusion, I’m definitely interested in following your project.
Just two minor things I noticed: it mentions that Ludi has brown eyes, but his sprite shows blue, so I assume that’s a typo, and there’s also another one. I played the version that's available directly on the website and I don't know how it works here, so I'm not sure if it's the latest one or not. 
(It seems I’m just like the MC in that I don’t have a life either.)