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I want to give more detailed feedback but I accidentally deleted what I had spent an hour writing about Lust, Holy, Sky and Lunar so. Maybe next update lol

The game is really well-written and has great characters and a fun gameplay system. I know it's still pretty early in development so any complaints I have are just stuff I'd like to see to be clear. The game is a little too easy for my taste and I would personally enjoy a Hard difficulty. I would like to see Sky and Holy magic as well as the Lust debuff nerfed a bit and for Lunar Magic to be slightly buffed. I would also like for the day cycle and time passage mechanics to have more importance and actually have enough consequence to factor into decision-making. In a similar vein I'd like mana management to be more prevalent, perhaps by repeated sex in combination with time passing without rest causing some kind of strain or stamina loss. MP gain from Attendants also need to be seriously nerfed. Your sexual stats and how they level are not really explained, and on a similar Spirit Kin are not given a proper explanation in terms gameplay or story. The game lets you set your gender preferences which I like a lot but there isn't any options for fetish preferences; you can avoid interacting with most of the fetishes if you don't want to but the option would still be nice, especially since piss shows up so often. Finally, the sex scenes are pretty good in a vacuum, but sex scenes with non-story-important npcs currently all use the same art for each that doesn't account for the different npc appearances. Creating some alts with different skin tones and hair color shouldn't be too hard and the differences wouldn't need to be too detailed since unimportant npcs themselves all are variations of the same character template.

I really really enjoyed what the game has so far to be clear, and the only reason I have so much to say about what I want changed is because I really think this game has the potential to exceed all my expectations. Excited to see future updates!

By the way I'm personally against the idea of a MalO-only route, since (in my interpretation at least) the point is that you can't rely on MalO by herself and need other people not only for your safety but to help her develop as a person instead of an all-consuming program. And i don't really care enough about Zellen to want more sex scenes with her. That said, I would LOVE an epilogue/ACT4, and if you implement those things in an ACT 4 that proves me wrong I'd have zero complaints. I'd be fully willing to support a Steam release too, with or without an ACT 4. I imagine I could scrounge up 5 or 6 dollars by the time a Steam release comes out, haha

Hey I can't comment on your page itself so im saying this here: I genuinely love all your work. Your VNs are some of the best-written media I've had the pleasure of experiencing, and if I knew how I'd genuinely write fanfic for your VNs just to be able to spend more time with the amazing characters you've crafted

Both scenes require you to uncage MalO at the first prompt while having gotten intimate with both MalO and Si-Won. After that just go to Zellen for her scene or decide not to for the 69 (you might be able to get both but I don't remember so I'll err on caution and say they're probably exclusive)

Enjoyed the game a lot in its current state despite the occasional annoying gameplay section and some old stereotypes. I do however have one thing I want to suggest that wouldn't require changing anything gameplay-wise. You see, despite dialogue with Kitty confirming that transgender people exist in the game world, there aren't any explicitly trans npcs. This could be remedied by having a minor npc mention they used horomones or succubus body modification, but I have another idea. You see, there is currently who character in the game whose questline asofnow ends them leaving to "discover themself." I do not know if there are any plans for this character to reappear in the story later on, but I would like to suggest that if and when they do they came back as a girl. It would not only be a satisfying direction for the character, but it would also be really really funny.