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Hiya Meredith, I really enjoy the background image for your menu scene. It makes me feel like I'm about to venture down the footpath and triggers the desire to put out a hand and touch the flowers as I walk. It's happy and engages my attention well. I love the colour green, so I appreciate your choices for your buttons and header panel.

I agree with Lucy in maybe changing your text colour for your instructions; however, I do get the feeling that maybe they were supposed to sit underneath the game title, sharing the green panel. If that were the case, then the white text would have been fine. 

I enjoyed interacting with your rolling Echidna, too. Such a great demonstration of your use of Unity's ProBuilder! It's great that your character's body changes direction as you move it around, and the chime on collection is a nice touch. My only feedback for your game scene would be to possibly add some kind of game barrier to stop the Echidna from falling into the abyss...which I did a couple of times.

Hi Lucy, I really enjoy the feel of your GreyBox Project! 

I appreciate the interactivity on your buttons, and your Echidna looks great! My only user feedback would be, next time, try smaller buttons. You have a great background, and the size of your current buttons takes away viewing space, where the user could look around and engage with your scene environment more. 

A great space to play around in!

Hi Gordon, sorry for the late feedback. Good luck with your assessment 3! I wanted to give you feedback regardless.

Really appreciate the thoroughness of this interactive application. I'm brand new to the world of IT and engaging with your application for HTML and CSS was helpful for a beginner.

Easy to use? 5

Information understandable? 4

Engaging? 5

Sounds appropriate? 4

Content appropriate? 5

On a scale of 1 to 5 (1 being least likely, 5 being most likely) would you:

Show this e-book to someone you know? 4

Re-use this e-book? 4

Other feedback:

I enjoyed the aesthetic of your application. As the user, I found the font of your body text a bit hard to decipher. It disappeared into the background slightly. However, I like that the bot speaks to you as your progress through the platform.