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This has progressed so much since I've last seen it! I especially enjoy the animated cut scene you had. I am a bit confused by all the story in the beginning. I feel like there is a way that could be condensed, because I feel like right when starting the game I have a lot to take in and memorize. But I also really like how many options there are for the dialogue. 

For the art, I think some of it needs tightened up. The backgrounds appear rather low resolution and I think they need some more polish to match the character's detail.

For the design, as I stated earlier I find the world just a bit confusing, because there is a lot I'm being told at once. Perhaps we can find out that their parent's have died later in the game.

Really dig this! It's definitely a difficult game but I like that. I feel like maybe the jump could be just a bit higher because I agree with the comment below. And also it would be cool to have other fruit you could pick up. Maybe some gross moldy fruit that you have to avoid. Overall though you have a very strong design language for this game and art style. Every asset looks amazing.

I really love the new background you've created! It really ties the style and story together more. The one thing I would like to see is more of an indication where we are supposed to jump. I liked how in the previous version  you had the ribbon and we could follow that up the trees.  I think something that would help the game look less separated by the seam would be if you created foreground elements, like darker trees and bushes.