I’m literally smiling so hard reading this.Thank you so much for the feedback.I never thought someone would take the time to actually give a full detailed review of my game.I really appreciate it.I’m happy to see you and your friend enjoy my story and characters.
I’m also understand and appreciate your feedbacks about the mini game,dialogue and grammar.There was a lot grammar mistakes before the game released but thanks to my cousin/beta tester( who’s more better at English writing than I am) most of the mistakes were resolved.I will try to fix the remaining grammar errors on the next update.I would also consider the google doc advice when writing for the next chapter.
The whole library mini game is meant to be unfair and hard.It reflects Valentines character as a whole.Valentines homophobic remarks was on purpose and it would be further explained/fleshed out in future chapters.I understand that the autistic insult might be offensive to a lot of people.As an autism myself, it didn’t bother me.But I get why many people would be bothered by it.Like you said,Devin is always harsh with her words but maybe I went too far with one or two of her words.Therefore I will tone it down in the next update.
Again thank you so much for the review ❤️ I really enjoy reading your thoughts about the characters and theories about what would happen.I hope to see you again for chapter 1B.
