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First off, i'll say what everyone is thinking: I can't believe this game is free! The amount of care and work that's been put into this blows me out of the water. People release a way inferior product and charge for it too. This is clearly a passion project, from the dialogues to the story and the sprites and you love to see it. The Dev mentioned wanting to give the players freedom of choice and it really shows. 

You know how Devs promise freedom and you exercise that freedom and then you're given a metaphorical slap on the wrist, either by internal monologue of your character (''maybe i shouldn't have done that'') or other characters in game admonishing you straight up. At no point i felt like this playing this game. The Dev developed each route, whether you choose to play a soft hearted, subdued character focused on the happy ever after end, or a headstrong calloused character that's still irrevocably in love with Mathias.

I did try other paths aka the soft hearted character and quickly came to the conclusion it was not for me (perfectly acceptable). I want to praise the push and pull route, the 'adversarial' relationship, the teasing (trying to), the stolen glances, with Mathias still SEEING you despite the walls your character builds because of an unwillingness to yield, but it is Mathias, so the choice suddenly becomes obvious. 

An example of this (spoiler free), is talking to Mathias after your nightmare, but choosing to lash out and be terrible because you're hurting and you're raw can end up with Mathias ordering you to kneel before him because he is your King. A metaphorical pull on the leash that's on your throat. However, this scene is directly referenced in the later chapters where it plays out in a very different manner. I see your work and your effort Dev. 

The game being in black and white is very charming. 

My interest is not with the Five Kingdoms. Even if the secondary characters are greatly written, sometimes I found my attention drifting when the narration mentioned secondary characters, as my interest lies with Mathias and the playable character, their relationship and rapport based on prior choices and what they can accomplish together. I believe that's the strength of the game.

This got very long without me realizing! I'll follow your game closely, I believe this has the potential to be something truly special.

I just finished your game today, what a treat it was!! I'll just start off by saying what we are all thinking: the art is amazing. That's some true display of quality and skill, I expected nothing less from you guys. The UI is nice and clean.  The writing is very good, no cringe, no grammar mistakes that I could see. The plot comes together nicely, and the mc feels consistent throughout all routes.

I don't know if you guys have multiple writers for the love interests or not, but I just want to shake Imbriss' writer's hand. He's my favorite and I love him. I picked him first for a reason, he feels so damn authentic, like he's a real person. The writing is good for him man, he's blunt, no bullshit or hidden agendas/manipulation, what you see is what you get. He's assertive, he's actually made me chuckle once or twice cuz he's just funny man lol.  I had trouble because of this, whilst I was doing other routes he shows up and straight up says ''You'll see you made a mistake choosing this guy over me and when it happens come to me,'' and I was like I know just lead the way :(

If I had to rate the boys: Imbriss>Momo>Faeryn>Hikmat

Momo is gonna wild on you at the start and you'll go wth did you just make me do you little b, but I liked the journey. Him lowering his walls in the end and letting mc know the real him. Faeryn's was ok. Nothing wrong per se, but the whole protective/wholesome boy/always proper and nice thing he's got going on just isn't my type. Hikmat's is just... a little boring for me personally, but maybe others will like it.

I can't wait to play other titles from you guys, keep up the good work!!

Holy hell this is incredible! I've never seen a demo so good! I have literally no critiques, the endings you can achieve are already interesting, the game demands your attention and makes you curious from the get go. My favorite voice is The Narrator, the guy should not do anything different cuz he's perfect and I love him lol. 

One question though, will the full game have option to lower the graphics? Maybe the ability to make the screen stop moving with the mouse if we want? As much as I liked it, I was also dropping frames. It was pretty bad.

I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for this one, very ambitious project.

Right from the start i could tell a lot of thought and work went into this VN, the backgrounds are detailed, the CG's slap, i was very impressed. I went for Leos my first time through and i suppose that says something about me. The only suggestion I have, not critique, is about the MC himself. For your future VN's (if there even are any planned), I'd wish to see a more flawed MC. Or a MC with more spunk, maybe some sarcasm, anything really, cuz right now Raen seems too good his moral compass too perfect, yeah he doesn't know much about, well, anything really, but his altruism is quite frankly so staggering that i had trouble connecting with him. As i mentioned, Leos is my favorite, i love this boy, but when Raen stated that ''we cant just leave him here'' after Leos tried to assassinate him and Fawn I was like.. really? We can't? Any person would lmao.

Also, if i didn't totally blanked out, do we ever find out if Soren wakes up at all?

I enjoyed the ride. I'll look closely for more titles from you :)

This was very enjoyable! Vincent is my favorite and I'm harboring hope cuz the mc said the original game changed, maybe this means i wont be kept in the basement by Vincent for the good end? Haha. But if this ends up happening I suppose I'll have to put my money where my mouth is, Vincent is caring, funny AND gets the ball rolling and pursues the mc. A breath of fresh air. for sure. The only 'criticism' I have is, the scream man. You know, when mc is shocked, you can hear this high pitched scream? Maybe it wouldn't have been so grating if it was only one time, or a shorter scream or something? I ended up turning all of the voices of which was a shame, cuz the other voices were ok. Maybe it was just me.

Anyways, I'm interested to see where it all leads! And the pink is glorious.

Neat little game with nice visuals. Life did get stressful for me recently, so imagine my surprise when Mr. Bartholomew and co. got me just the cat i needed. Looking forward to seeing more things from you guys, maybe slightly longer games :)

Royal Alchemist was amazing from start to finish so naturally I am looking forward to this game as well from you guys. The demo does a great job to pull you in, I already have lots of questions like why does Lucius look like he is Emrys' brother and why is he in our amulet thing?? At least it doesn't seem like we are keeping him prisoner lol. Also the big reveal at the end of the demo blew me away and got me thinking about what is our true purpose and whether we are good or evil. Somewhere in between? I especially liked this because it's different from its predecessor.

Concerning the RO's there is a lil something for everyone which is also amazing. Darryl is a sweetheart, but I was personally taken with Emrys from the moment everyone warns you to stay away, reverse psychology lol. And he knows us from somewhere as well which again, the mysteries.

Even  the soundtrack was slapping like when you're on the ship and fighting. 2023 can't come any faster.

I just finished playing the demo and I had to tell you guys that I really liked it! Really, all the pieces are in place for this to be a great visual novel, from the crisp design of the characters, to the fact that you have your own choice of protagonist. Even with the choice, I admit I fully expected I would go/do the same thing with the love interest, so imagine my surprise when I went to see a movie with Adrian as Jace and shopping with him as Hazel. I can already see a lot of work went into this and I absolutely love it.

That being said, one has to have a favorite, so I shall come forth and proclaim my love for Adrian(/Jace.) You guys did a legit job with those questions at the beginning, the game threw the boy my way first thing lol. Funny thing, I'm actually not that into the childhood friend trope but this is good stuff. From the fact that Adrian rarely smiles so Jace has to drag them out of him (so when he does smile, it's that much sweeter), to the fact that Adrian seems to be so in tune with Jace. They already have a strong bond and you can feel it through the  writing, chef's kiss man. I just keep thinking about this poor boi having to wait as I pull my head out of my ass and realise that yes I am in fact in love with my childhood friend. It has been said that Jace ran away when a guy hit on him, the drama, the freak out, maybe Jace trying to avoid Adrian as he ''thinks things through'' (aka he's an embarassed big baby) ah yes i can already see it and I'm here for it lol.

From Hazel's side, I'm really interested in Stephanie. On top of her actually being a cinnamon roll, I think both girls compliment each other nicely.

I didn't mean for this to get so long, good luck and I can't wait until the full version is released!

First of all I would like to say that I made an account on this site just to leave a review of this game. Yeah. I just really had to get my thoughts out there on this quality game.

I followed this game since last year. The demo told me right away that I wanted to keep an eye out for this one. Really, it’s such a rare thing nowadays you know?The game hits the mark on everything: the interesting plot, the characters (the princes, the mc who is dynamic and most importantly, not a doormat and even the side characters). The person who did the CG’s, I just want to shake their hand man. These are some quality visuals and I won’t lie: this is what initially lured me in last year.

The rpg aspect of the game was certainly a nice challenge as well. It also made me feel more engaged compared to the regular vn, where, bless them but all you usually have to do is click and click. You really feel like you have control over your destiny. As the devs said in the comments there, if you put emphasis on certain stats (Etiquette/Combat – Aurelius, Leadership – Nazir and Charisma/Beauty/Etiquette/ – Serin, and after playing once I realised you kinda want that Intelligence up there as well regardless of playthrough, because it makes you feel like a god, being able to predict some… cough things about the plot) you will be fine. This would be the perfect time to mention that I played on Easy (yes I know, truly a disgrace, but this one time I was like you know that, it is story time) and with +5 to my stats from 2 deaths. Honestly, if you’re not a fool like me and click Overwrite Save again and again like I did on my first playthrough you will be fine lol. Just try to be prepared with a save on a new slot every couple of hours, should things go terribly wrong. If you want full completion however, may god have mercy on you, I shall think of you fondly.

I achieved all 3 romance endings, with Serin being my favorite. He was my first choice, he’s had me since he helped me at the gate to be honest. His personality lured me in from the beginning. He truly is best boy, doing his best and the teasing in his route is precious af. Even if I picked Serin, I knew I wanted to give Aurelius a try as well. Cheeky boy lol. He’s basically the Defrosting Ice Queen trope (and I love that trope a lot) so I really liked his route as well. No spoilers, but some moments in his route make it really worth it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).

Now Nazir. I’ll just come out and say it: since I tackled the other princes before him I was already coming in like “Okay so this mother f’er goes frolicking god knows where every time, oh I’m sorry Nazir it’s just that we are in mortal danger here.” If only I knew. No spoilers, but the plot twist really is top tier. It’s my favorite moment in the route and I love how you act as MC as well, reliable and gentle. My apologies dear Nazir, should have kept a close eye on you lol. After having completed 3 playthrougs of the same game (something I didn’t even intend to do, but I just had to know what was up with Nazir) I can safely say that all princes are deserving of your time and you will definitely find something to like.

Tl;dr: Solid plot with compelling twists. Good characters. Interesting MC. At least pick up the demo if you’re on the fence, it’s quite long and it will tell you everything you need to know. So much heart went into this game and I can’t think of a negative even if I try. My congratulations to the devs, whatever you guys come up with in the future I’ll definitely check it out. Thanks for your hard work!