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Os itens mágicos desse módulo são o seu ponto mais forte!

Uma mini sugestão é que tem muito espaço em branco em algumas áreas, dava pra usar um espaçamento um pouco maior pra facilitar a leitura. 

Aventura curtinha com premissa muito boa e arte fenomenal!

Meu único ponto negativo foi na escolha fonte. velho que sou eu não sei se ela tá rachurada/borrada por conta do meu astigmatismo ou é a fonte mesmo :< 

Eu curti muito a aventura! Super engraçado/coincidência que tantas aventuras misturam ficção com medieval. 

Pra mim, o melhor dessa aventura são os mapas (em todos os leveis: hex, ajuda visual do atol, e por fim o mapa da dungeon). Tá tudo esmiuçado e super fácil pra o mestre entender o imaginário da aventura.

Eu acho que esta é a aventura mais completa do jam!  Ela é fácil de ler, tem uma premissa legal, e o layout é fenomenal!

Se Cairn 2e BR precisasse de uma aventura pra um "starter set", essa seria ela!

Hey,, thanks for the spreadsheet. Th e pulse rifle in the loadout has 2d10, but in the book it says 3d10. Dunno if this is cause you had a different edition

This is one of my top rated entries! Kudos

Got it. Thanks 

Love it! I am just a little confused with the inspiration, I am reading the title of the second entry an it says "a strange tale of the future" but in the text you mention the second entry as "thunder in the dawn" . I suppose it is one of the tales within the zine, right?

Love the isometric maps. I was trying to see if I could find the cartographer, kudos yo them (or you)

Thanks. I had so much fun coming up with them.

Love that it has a recommended playlist. 

The first picture reminds me of "Skinner Sweet from American Vampire"

Love the isometric map!!!

The purple color tone  is so calming and fitting. Also, I just signed up for click clack lessons

The d66 table is so clever!

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback. As someone with ADHD, I am driven by visual cues that can help a reader (including myself) quickly understand the text.

The tokens are mostly from Ink Potion Studios, it's worth becoming their highest tier Patreon at least for a month to get some nice assets.

I really liked the red-colored text in between paragraphs. It helps my ADHD brain stay on track. 

I appreciate the vibes you were going for, and I think a brief summary at the beginning would be a fantastic addition—similar to the summaries you provided for the inspirations. It would be a nice touch to set the stage for what’s to come.

+1. I reported the same issue on discord