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Oh, good to know. Thanks

I like it so far, though amount of disclaimers is a bit alarming. Is it really necessary to tackle so many heavy subjects at once? I think trying to overcome depression and suicidal attempt would have been enough to make the story compelling 

Can protagonist be top in this game?

Thanks for confirming exactly what I was pointing out.

Cyro enacts violence. The culture justifies it. The narrative frames it as normal. No internal conflict, no real accountability—just institutional grudge wrapped in a history lesson. That’s not complexity. That’s moral laundering.

You’re not portraying a flawed society being challenged. You’re portraying a broken one being affirmed.

And then you smile and ask about new characters.

That’s what makes this immoral. Not just what happens—but how easily it’s waved off as “the way things are.”

Kindness that never confronts harm isn’t kindness.

It’s cowardice in costume.

Pretty immoral story so far. Cyro hurt James and gets no accountabilty becasue christianity or something. That's not a kindness. Thats a cowardice under a mask of holiness

> While Naho had some really bad takes

at least they gave somewhat justfiable explanations instead of dismissively saying “the x thing is bad” like you. Seems helluvalot better in my opinion.

My knowledge of Japanese role playing games is vast and deep ^_^

Tales of Arise is one if the worst Tales Of games in my humble and totally not objective opinion, so unfortunately yes, i know

But thats a discussion for a different comment section I suppose 

im lowkey afraid to touch the game after the last update 😬 

oh hey, its Rinwell!

English version?

Feels an interesting setup for things to come but as a standalone story completely pointless.

I don’t mind ai art but it’s definitely stigmatized quite a lot in the current environment. Hopefully you are prepared to deal with inevitable backlash 

> My theory is that the very first True Wyverians were born through experiments with humans and monsters,

Somehow I doubt monster hunter tribes have access to that technology.

Still more uplifitng than 80% of other fvns

Feels like an incomplete part of a much bigger story. Has absolutely nothing of value to “mean a lot” to anyone, be it readers or developers. Im not even sure it deserves to have a price tag to be honest.

shill

Sounds way too good to be true... I know it is ai-empowered but I don't think it is as advanced at this current stage to create novels from your stories and generate character sprites just like that

Oh hey, its Edelgard!

> Aside from that, when you have a world where the rules are different, it’s important to lay them out ahead of time

No, not really. Majority of readers have enough intelligence to pick up those rules on the fly as they witness them in action firsthand. “Laying rules ahead of time” is called “info-dumping”, and its a narrative tool that is rightfully criticized by both readers and writers alike.

That aside, game never explicitly tells that it try to mimick any sort of court. I’m not sure if you have noticed that or not, but societies in monster hunter universe aren’t exactly modern and progressive, and expecting a civilization that is stuck somewhere in stone age to be up to par to modern law rules is ridiculous.

This is a fictional world tho, it doesn’t have to bend to the real one.

Not a question, but if you really determined to release english translation I highly advise you scout for volunteers on "Furry Paradie & Visual Novels" discord server

Where is new story content?

Not checking your name for availabilty is a phenomenal stupidity the likes of which I haven't heard of in a while. It should be your number one priority when releasing a new game. Just wow.

Also before attacking furries, *maybe* make sure your own game doesn't suck first.

Have a nice day.

If Ryder tops Arthur while Arthur has another soul in his body doesn’t it technically considered to be non-con? 🤔

Why not add themes of combating racism and transphobia as well? I’m sure they will also fit nicely into the story about intergalactic war.

Making “body positivity “ as one of your theme in a place where physical fitness is an absolute necessity is beyond stupid in particular 

Portagonist looks ugly af. Who will want to play as this woke neckbeard?

Didn’t like it. The story is a non-sensical fever dream, through and through 

Actually i think this is completely valid and thorough critique 

That is very disrespectful question.

Hopefully this one will have better controls.

Don’t bother. This dev has his head way too far into his own ass to accept help from anyone.

spoilers?

The last update feels like it’s a canon for Ridge’s route specifically. The way he didn’t want to talk at a testimony at first, suffering from grief while blaming himself, and rejecting scrivener while being not fine feels like something that he specifically would do. Even the poetic irony of him being carved with a hunting knife *again* feels like something that would happen to only him. Having every other love interest adopting similar behavior for a while feels weird and out of character even with such circumstances.

On a side note the way most characters rejected scrivener after elder’s passing felt unnecessarily cruel. This especially goes off Josef.

Cyro:

Also Cyro:

Such kind. Much wow.

well, okay then

what is the ratio of top and bottom scenes?

Ya all just brainwashed by the woke mind virus that states ugly is beautiful now. Not surprised.

MC looks ugly af. Who will want to play as this neckbeard?

Yes, soon we will get episode about Frasier's backstory

imagine being so dumb and lazy you couldn’t even be bothered to read a description to a game you are defending.

> The only one who is dead inside is you

Said an actual dead inside person