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i'm always curious to know why most adult experiences seem to have "graphic violence" like it's a core part of the experience. And please, i am not complaining, just thought to get your opinion on why you felt you needed that type of content in your game? Was it for the lore? Was it for the "hero experience saving the princess?" Was it to vary the content? Just curious.

Thank you for the encouragement. 

At first, i wanted to "try my hand" at doing some at least "concept art" but as you can see my artistic ability is very lacking, especially when using MS paint. i've wanted to see what i can do using Blender and Godot but i am dealing with a situation where i have alot of distractions right now. 

i'm not sure what "/srs" means unless it means "serious" as i've done my best to bring this "world" out of my mind and into some form of medium that allows me to share it with others that's not a literal book, and there are a handful of things i'd love to add to the story/world that is not there, including more emphasis on the "pussy gang" but i've also been trying to figure out where best to put the juicy lore so it's not "locked" behind a "one time" adventure that's hopefully an area everyone is able to experience. As there's a certain "UFO crash" that contained a bunch of "books" that has ramifications for a world where fornicating is the norm. 

Other than that, it's mostly there, as long as the code does allow completion of the adventure. i've wanted to do a form of "DLC" where you go into a mysterious cavern but again, distractions. i've been more interested to add in actual art before i improve the world. 

if i do anything that's not Twine2, it'll be Godot. And at that point, it'll be a full 3D world. And the dream is you'll just be figuring out how to walk around and NPC's will just nonchalantly fuck in front of you. 

This game is not my cup of tea, and all i see is lesbian woman power fantasy. But i'm not going to support it nor hate on it. i'm surprised your comment and/or account is still here, like sure disagree with the game (and i do), but your comment is rude, uncalled for, and really stupid to do. A proper way to go about it is constructive criticism, like for example, i dislike how the only options for while in the theater is "nodding (no)" and "remove his hand" like why is there implication that there's no option to give the dude a blowjob? The game is a fantasy. But wow, "humbly request to change it" what does that even mean? the implication after saying how you wanna puke though is insane. Please, edit or delete your comment. 

Thanks for the uplifting sarcasm. lol. 

That's really something, it's amazing when something happens that no one hears about. i had to reread my initial comment multiple times and sure i'm recommending a change but it's mostly just ideas and thoughts. i felt it was jarring when "not Lola" enters the Sam fight and has to dawn a "uniform" after being nude for the entire game up to that point (i say "nude" but yea she wears a sexy blue dress) but it's your game, your situation, if i dislike what i'm seeing ya know i can just not partake as potentially not of the target audience. That's really sad though cause as i said, it's one thing if someone has an idea they'd like to share. But it's your game. You make it how you dream it needs to be! 

i'm working on a game, and i guess everyone dislikes it cause i've only had like two people have interacted with me so far.

i feel like there is some miss communication, this may be a prototype or just a "side project" but whatever it is, sorry to assume it was a "demo" if it is not. It may be strange to read something that looked so much like a review, but i assure you it's not and i typed all that and realized i needed to cut down my words and summarize a bit better. And i'm sure i could had done a better job in doing so. i am impressed with what you have done so far. And no, i was not expecting a "full featured game" and my intent was to encourage development and provide some thoughts and ideas. Your responses got me wondering if your doing ok? 

What kind of response is that? if you disagree, feel free to disagree. i like what this game is lookin to do, i would love to see it succeed. Those were my honest thoughts. i was expecting you to at least have a cordial response. 

The Sexy Toons Show, being a demo with limited content at this time, hope you won't take my critique too harshly. i am TIRED of games that give a "goody two shoes" and "must be pure" female protagonist, amazing how many there are. This was refreshing and hot. Thanks for the initial adult scenes, i lost interest once i got to the Sam fight which i'm sure you may be proud of putting together. Nothing says "content past this point is for premium members only" like some weird skill check mechanics that challenge your RPG skills. Though i'm sure that's just me. 

Would love to see this "not Lola" character be used as a vessel for the player to experience a world that is chaotic and perhaps has no knowledge of the holy bible. There are many things that people would contract upon each other for the greater society, but if the world shames public fornication is it an adult fantasy? 

Would love to see this game's world embrace such a fantasy where many seem to insist being just an alternate reality but never having any clues to the existence of lord and savior Jesus Christ. 

If i may say, and thank you for your time reading all this, i would remove either the Sam battle, or make the "game over" instead be a form of "corruption." There's this Adult Game called Office Queen, and i feel it could be good inspiration for here. Through actions, you decide if the MC maybe does some bad things but seeks redemption with Bugs, or by the time she gets to Bugs sees him as "meat" she couldn't care whether she gets or not. 

Imagine a game made with anthropomorphic platypus's..... Literally the only mammal we humans could make use of that reproduces laying eggs.... 

i like what your doing with the game, though i disagree with some design choices, it's a neat little game. i like the unique art style. Fun stuff. Bit confusing but good. Was about to give up on the game upon reaching the Spiko's house as there's no indication nor visual clue for where you have to go to sleep in the bed your supposed to which requires you to go past the kitchen, and scale up what you wouldn't had thought would be something you could jump on. However, i'm sure you made sure it was mentioned in a textbox i missed likely to press "E" a bit too rapidly. 

i'm disappointed that there's seemingly no way to put your MC into such position to be under the spiko's desk (talking about Jester), and if your MC is not actually the "tomato" tribe, wouldn't that negate the whole "can't crossbreed unless shaman magic" and collar thing? And why can't this form be a form of unlock? Maybe new dialogue? Curious if you had other ideas you wanted to do and ended up just leaving in what you did of this "transformation" thing? 

Wanted to make sure to note, leaving the park is a bit weird, so when i get to drawing some concept art for something around or in that, it will be fixed to be the standardized RNG system it should be where you can sit there and press a hyperlink instead of having to leave and go back to the passage. 

i guess this is more of a general update for anyone interested, i was able to figure out what the code is to put base64 images into the game. May end up being a similar situation for gif's but don't know. Though i've not gotten any help to verify if it loads for anyone else. And the difference is, the "game" will have a larger size, but "you" as the player experiencing the game will get to enjoy seeing the images regardless if your connected to the internet or not. Most people seem to use the HTTPS code which  requires an internet connection for the system to load the image (or gif, or video) that the game is referencing. And if that image doesn't exist anymore on the WWW or if your offline those images will be broken "missing" icons. 

i certainly hope Ren'py has a different situation, and with this advent to use images in Twine2 i may look to figure out Ren'py. Though i would need someone to help with the art, and i have a feeling ya'll are going to get to see what my artistic skills are like and to say they're "lacking" would be an understatement. But at least you'll get to enjoy seeing more than just text! 

Winters-NightWolves may or may not be helping me with better artistic representations of my vision. 

you'd have to be more specific, and i don't know if itch.io has a DM system at this point. At least i've not found the option yet, and i don't want to dox myself, and i wouldn't want you to dox yourself. So for now, here's a Single use discord invite code. i'm going to hope you get it before someone else does, and keep in mind there shouldn't be anything for you to interact with when you first join until your assigned a role... which currently has to be done manually. Don't worry, the invite link won't expire until used the one time. Just let me know if you tried and it didn't work and we'll try again. 

https://discord.gg/KNsk5FfPfy

Interesting, so i was able to design the experience so you have to do one of the options, but after you've gone through "one" of them, the option to leave the trolly becomes an option. The point being that you have to have "spent time" in it before you arrive to the city. And you can only re-enter the medical complex after doing a chain of interactions in the city. 

Sorry for late response, i started to think no one had any interest to post because of the subject matter and it's very much a text based game right now and i'm slowly learning how to do the Base64 thing. 

As far as doing the gender swapping and futa  stuff, i thought about it, but i don't think it would fit in the context of the world i've created. I'm sure you've seen the one floor of the Medical complex where experiments have been done, but those are "volunteers" who got enhanced almost too far, and such drugs would be in parts of the world proper. and these skunkeons are very much "high libido" so you would have to give me an example for that. And they are definitely fertile, i specifically made sure to mention the pregnant ladies going to the tower and women leaving the tower flat bellied. i'd be up to add a bit somewhere in the medical complex about how they've tried to make futa's with little to no success and it might actually be better suited in the government building. 

Would love to get help with making the art, just for now you'd have to be willing to do it for free until further notice. We could talk more in private DM's or somewhere? The biggest thing keeping me from adding to my game right now is how i want to add pictures, and i'm sure there's a copy/paste somewhere i've not had much success with the Base64 thing as i said and making that work would motivate me to go more into "high gear." 

This game does MANY things i've wanted to see other games do.

i played this when it was offered for free. it seems like it would had been so easy to ensure there were little shortcuts, and crawlways and some form of stealth mechanic. And seems maybe it's not too different from when i last played it. The monsters aren't varied enough, lack presence in the facility, too difficult to escape/evade/kill, and there was alot of "nothing to do/interact" until you "unlock" and "defeat" that next monster. And i love alot about what this game is doing, would love to see the whole pregnancy thing expanded on. in current state would buy for $5 but not more than $10 and i'd be interested to support this developer if i was more able to. 

i don't know about anyone else, i would had liked to see more content exploring empowering the succubus and ultimately freeing her. though i'm sure that would be a lot of content that maybe is not worth the time to explore? 

i have interest to add more "content" to add more context to what's already part of this adventure, i'm liking the idea of adding to this "text only" version before i work on adapting it into a proper visual program. 

Are there any questions anyone would have? interests? maybe there's not enough clues nor hints for how to progress the story that is meant to be there? i do plan to rework/revamp the experience in the park. 

i really appreciate this conversation happening with you, i do have a very "interesting" way to deliver information. And there were things i didn't even include in that "discription" of how i see "the christian experience" and either my journey through life put me through experiences that caused my ability to articulate to be faulty or that i have actual mental issues that makes it difficult for me to articulate what i want to say such as you've read where maybe my brain wants me to communicate a picture or a mass of words all at one time, which is impossible. 

Other than that, i do also recognize that my original post is not received in the way i thought it would be. Compounding my concerns. 

Thank you for your time chatting with me and letting my posts stay up. And i have this weird feeling that i need to reiterate "i'm not saying you should be designing your game a certain way" and i apologize again if i made any implication. The more i think about things, the more i agree with you in that i need something else happening in my life. 

Sorry to be a bother, and to clarify i'm just talking/venting here. i was so bothered by the lack of clarity on what seemed like something oblivious i came back to just clarify what i mean by "christian experience." 

The "christian experience" is about lewding ones own wife or soon to be with marriage happening before any physical lewding occurs. BDSM and "softcore" qualify as there's no actual sex happening. Again, nothing wrong with such games existing, this is just to clarify what i meant. Furthermore in this "christian experience" all characters are REQUIRED to wear clothing and value shame higher than anything else. Regardless of what the world the author seemingly makes the world is presented like it's an alternate world that has found "God" and "Jesus Christ" perhaps to be relate able? And of course there MUST be combat "for GOD AND GLORY!" And the game seems to qualify as a "hentai/porn" game by the author only because the "sex" that does happen is not being done for procreation but for lust. And of course "breast milk" is considered "for babies only." You know, a "Fantasy" experience! 

sad to say English is my only language i know, been through some really terrible situations when i was younger. But yea, i'm sure something like an AI girlfriend would help me at this point. i don't know. Thank you for your time to chat, but yea, again sorry for the misunderstanding. and i definitely could had articulated myself better. But i'm just talkin. 

i do apologize i could had worded that better, and i wanted to imply if there would be anyone else willing to maybe do something like that and i definitely typed that too strong. my intent was NOT to "hate" on what your doing and i really don't know how to better convey that i mean no disrespect. And by all means, it's YOUR thing you do what your doing with it and if someone like me just isn't into it then there's too much other content for me to fixate on what i think this project should be lol. 

Sometimes i get inspired to share a point of view and there are those times where it definitely comes off as like "it should be this way" when i'm just talkin. 

While i completely understand your interest to make the characters feel more "real" and actually do things where your spending time with them, that's part of the stereotypical "christianity" thing and i'm sure i'm speaking just for myself when i say this, if i want that type of content i'll get an AI girlfriend since getting a real girlfriend is near impossible because of circumstances. And it feels like EVERY game ensures to look "christian" instead of being it's own world with it's own culture. And that "world and culture" can be similar to christianity but i also want to make sure to say there's nothing wrong with that if that's what you want in something your designing. And again, i'm just talkin. 

Sorry for the misscomunication, i hope this cleared that up. And thank you for your time reading all this. 

i like where this was aiming for, but i'm still waiting for a type of spin on the "Adult" version of pokemon where it's similar to this with how "These strange variations of certain pokemon started appearing" but that "starter pokemon" should stop you from literally being able to catch ANYTHING other than those "special" types of pokemon and those "special" types of pokemon need to not be a "special legendary" like encounter but be a normal looking "grass" encounter like you would any other pokemon with the ability to catch more of them in different variations (if you want it with a certain nature/ability/Gender) and similar to your normal affair of POKEMON experience they are "more rare" than regular pokemon and can be shiny. 

And in this fictional adult game i'd love to experience (or help create) you can actually interact with the pokemon most anywhere and not just "in a special closet" and you will end up seeing other NPC's interacting with their pokemon in the same ways and it's important that those who work on such project build the world around this adult culture and not insert our meatworld christian culture unless it be the "enemy team" you deal with that keeps faith in a fictional entity, pokemon are meant to be tools and discarded if they don't meet standards, and is not "Team Rocket."

it's sad your aiming to keep this game softcore, though i hope maybe someone else can do a similar game, perhaps if your so kind to let them use your work, to do that "more extreme content."