hi! you have to add up ALL the weights of the jars, not just the first one
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i'm not going to say what my issues were particularly cause i think it's mean to provide criticism unasked for especially with such a personal work, but i wanted to say that the caliber of your style and prose kept my issues from weighing down my experience with the game. once i finished it, it felt more like personal disagreements or choices i would have made differently than any objective criticism to the detriment of the story. magda's story speaks to so many thoughts and insecurities that i've had and i wanted to thank you for putting this out there, and, despite what happens, making me feel like i (and everyone who's felt like i do sometimes) am not a monster. it's the type of story that isn't a bandage for anything, but makes me feel less lonely. fantastic job