Enjoying the story but having a real issue with Rae at this point. MC is written to be smarter than he is acting with her. The obviousness of the shady, manipulative shit she is pulling by chapter 25 of her story is comical but the MC seems to just be a moron incapable of seeing it. At this point any interaction with her for me I want a "Until you can stop the secrets and manipulation you can go fuck yourself." option but all we get are "Oh alright, I guess you'll fill me in during your villain speech."
The MC is easily in a position to force her to spill her secrets but is too dumb to do it. Kinda kills the story for me.
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