I. Am. So. Addicted!! I can't get enough! The settings. The storyline. Character development. The humor. ...The sex! Seriously can not wait for the next release!! The only critique I have, is in some of the intimate/sex scenes, especially some of the earlier ones, the main characters language feels unnatural. Almost like it's forced. I feel like there are a handful of moments when he should be more tender than rough and animalistic (a scene with Annie comes to mind). Other than that...Don't change a thing (other than including another run in with Chop-Chop lol)!!
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