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Your submission is so unique! I love hearing the live instrumentation, and the fretless bass does scream Jaco. Very well put together. My only criticism is that I wish there were more melodic moments. Text based adventure have very little to focus on or distract the listener, so having clearer melodies helps it feel less in the background.  Even in Twin Peaks, there's so much to pay attention to, visually and plot-wise, and yet I'm certain you hum Laura Palmer's theme in your head right now. Overall awesome work, definitely one of my favorites I've heard so far.

Sleepless was a very fun track; I like the slow evolution and layering of additional tracks. It portrays a pretty concise story as a result. As said before make sure that track doesn't get so loud that it clips. Rem needed to be fleshed out a little more, it felt like a good start to a track but needed some additional instrumentation to fill it out.