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So far, the art is good & the game has a lot of potential. Since it is at the beginning of its development, I'll throw in some constructive criticism. To preface, I finished Lisa & Amber's quests. I am also someone who played a lot of Genshin Impact prior to Fontaine.

Dialogue: There is just way too much dialogue. I'm glad you have a lot to say - as not enough is harder to fix in my opinion - but there is just a lot of unnecessary dialogue. There is also some strange dialogue because things like Amber telling a story about her being found nude in the hot springs sounded more like a big deal than it really was.

Story: Lots of potential. I really hope you expand to Liyue, Inazuma, and more. Didn't seem like you focused too much on the main story (finding Lumine), but that's okay. There were some continuity errors like when meeting Lisa for the first time when you are new to Monstadt, let alone Teyvat. I do like that the story is close enough to Genshin Impact without being exactly the same. 

Gameplay: Good so far. Not much to say here as it is just the city of Monstadt with not a lot to do with money. Looking forward to what else is implemented, but obviously it is a VN, so not expecting anything too crazy, lol.

Scenes: The art for this game is fantastic. I believe that this game needs more scenes both SFW and NSFW as there are a few scenes described, but not shown. The dialogue box does hide some scenes sometimes, so maybe consider panning some up or zooming out.

Other:  I do think that blocking the gallery behind a paywall isn't a good idea  as players can just save beforehand anyways. Just seems like an inconvenience.

Like I said, so far so good. It has a lot of potential and I really look forward to what you have planned!

Yeah, I ended up figuring all this stuff out. My points of 2 & 3 are actually not applicable as I just didn't understand it at first.

Really of those 3 suggestions, only 1 would be helpful because it did take me a second run to learn a couple of things. Just like a "?" tooltip or something that you can hover over.

Also didn't realize how the guide in the top right was organized at first, so probably on me for not reading the whole thing before posting.

Really awesome demo!

A few suggestions, but maybe I just missed it:

1) More descriptions. Had to figure some things out like giving milk to goblins & the level of the milk.

2) Choose which goblins are in the nest. Ended up losing most of my basic goblins, but had a lot of shaman(?) goblins & I wanted as many basic for my front line.

3.) Pleasure rooms need to be more worth it. Currently breeding rooms & pleasure rooms both give 3g, but pleasure rooms are way more expensive.

Anyways, it is an amazing demo & I look forward to seeing where it goes!

I love this game! Its story & humor is pretty enjoyable!

I am just curious if InvaderGary would be willing to put the walkthrough on itch? I know it's $3 on Patreon, but I was hoping to purchase it on itch instead. It could be $3, or maybe even $9 as long as it stays that price at full release.

If not it's no big deal. You are doing an amazing job developing this game! I've seen the public posts on Patreon so I want to say that you're doing great & you don't owe anyone anything when it comes to this game, so take your time.

Thank you!

I played this game back in late 2021, I thought it was funny & fun, and I really enjoyed it then. I've been waiting ever since for chapter 1, watching the discord for any sneak peeks and whatnot. I was thinking of skipping this update (1.2.3) and still waiting for ch. 1, but I saw that this update was to show what Komisari has learned and how much better Komisari has gotten since the prologue. I am so happy that I ended up playing it because it is AMAZING! The content is so much better and it makes me that much more excited for ch.1 and it is just as funny as I remember (the ice cream scene had me laughing so much). I just wanted to say what a great job you've done Komisari & keep up the great work! I'm really eager to see what comes next!

Also, quick question; will we get a recap for what happened in the prologue before continuing to ch.1? I failed a lot of those questions in the event because I haven't played for a while. No big deal, it would just be nice to get a recap so I don't have to remember along the way.

Hello, so I really enjoy these types of games and I'm rather interested in getting the game. I just have two questions; Is it possible to "collect" all romancible NPCs? I don't necessarily like to do multiple runs of these kind of games & I like to build a harem for the most part. My second question is if there is a walkthrough for the game. Maybe one that helps build that harem? I saw that it was apart of some bundles and whatnot, but I don't necessarily want everything that are in the bundle, just the walkthrough.

Thank you & I'll probably get the game either way, I just had those questions before I purchased it!

I like a lot of these ideas! I only worry that there are 336 days in your calendar year, so if I miss something like a holiday, I have to wait for 336 in-game days? I like something like Stardew Valley where it's only 4 months, so if you miss something, it's not that far away. Otherwise, everything else sounds great! Keep doing the awesome work you do!

I like the idea of more early game, somewhat grindy, ways to get money because I do feel like it's a bit slow in the beginning when trying to get money. I also like the idea that we don't have to deal with every sex scene. At least making it so you can turn on or off certain fetishes. A lot of everything else seems great!

Any idea when PO will be finished or is it too early to tell?

This game looks amazing, & I like the sound of your other game that I saw on Patreon: Malise & the Machine. I'd love to play it, but it seems that the game is not finished & I don't have a steady enough income to join your patreon. Do we have any idea as to when it might be finished because I would gladly pick up both games when they are & would gladly pay a higher price for them for it looks like a lot of time & energy went into this! I totally understand though if not, it's difficult to tell with smaller dev teams & whatnot.

It was a really good concept. I liked it!

Things to change would probably be more interactivity. There were only really 3 buttons I could use, so it would be nice to maybe try & cater more to the various people.

Also the art could be improved. At least some color other than white & blue would be nice. Maybe animations, but all this could be way down the line.

Then either difficulty settings, or multiple levels. Maybe even upgrades (There I go again thinking too big for a prototype, haha)

Either way, I think it's good & should be improved upon.

Getting really close to that big 1.0! I'm curious though, do you intend to go past that? If so, will you do something special for the 1.0 update?

Hi! I don't know if it's a bug or a mechanic I don't understand, but I noticed that the fitness stat goes down when I'm jogging or working out sometimes. Then it goes up other times when I do the same activities. It just seems odd to go down when I'm jogging, exercising, or dancing.

I agree with some of the comments below where you have to beat an enemy a certain amount of times to auto-battle that specific enemy.

So to make sure; if we bought the game for $5 previously on itch, we will still have access to further episodes, but as a patch instead, so we just update our existing game?

I really like this one! I like the current cover more though with the 4 girls around the hunter, but they are both really good!

Yeah, I did the exact same thing; getting it half off in November, & I don't have 0.7a.

This game is rather good! I am wondering, are the developers thinking of making the gallery only images or will there eventually be the actual scenes to play out?