Hello! I was actually going to start by apologizing because I do agree that my writing could have been better, especially in the scenes where the mc goes missing and how their friends reacted later. Those parts were definitely not executed well on my part, and I do plan to improve the writing overall.
However, seeing the edit go from “interesting story” to “stolen from Genshin and Honkai+ story is cliché” feels rather unnecessarily harsh. I’m ofc open to constructive criticism because without it I simply won’t be able to improve, but this comment feels rude rather than helpful.
