I found a small bug and it only took me under a minute from first launch xD . When you try to adjust text speed setting game crashes (it's reproducible, tried it a couple of times with the same result).
EDIT: Other than that everything's fine, keeping in mind that's your first game it still feels more like a prologue chapter than a full-fledged game. Every aspect works together great and manages to create the right atmosphere for the situation. The only thing that I didn't like is how the "kiss" choice (the one that's on bed) was made unavoidable and that it chose itself, it wasn't a great way to move story along (it feels like there's better ways to proceed than this, but I suspect that it's that way because of crunch and\or fatigue). In conclusion you did great (game achieves the thing it's going for and that's good), keep on keeping on.