Hey, no problem!
I'm sorry if the comment was a bit, uh, harsh perhaps? It wasn't intended to be but i just stated what came to mind at the time. Ah, i see. Now that i understand what you were going for, i can kinda get why there wasn't choices, though i still feel that could've been implanted. I guess i just like games that are a little more interactive, if you get what i mean? But i better understand why there wasn't now, and i totally respect that though you'd want players to enjoy it, it also has to be something you like too - so i get why you decided to go with what you wanted! It is your game and i respect that, and i admire you for actually going a head and making it. Not only for making it but for publishing it as well, because that takes a lot of courage considering fan bases can be toxic and really harsh when it comes to judging stuff inspired by or based off of their favourite games/etc. Not saying the Yandere sim fans are like that, but just a lot fan bases in general tbh.
See, i can understand that. But at the same time, it kind of made certain actions and things a bit...odd? Illogical even. I may be remembering wrong (because i haven't slept and lfhrehrv, so feel free to correct me). But like, when Yan-Chan goes to kill the rival and she's stopped, everyone's like "that's bad!!11 illegal!!11 he doesn't like illegal things!!1 he won't love u if you do that" and she's like "shit, u be right. i won't kill....4 now" Like, that's not how (imo) an angel would react to some chick getting ready to end somebody's life. And i know that for the angel dude, he's torn between who to help love wise....but i don't get that. He knows the chicks crazy, to the point where she will kill, why would he even want to help someone like that? But again, that's me being critical. I think it could've worked better if perhaps he did not know of her nature going into it? Like, he met her and she was charming and nice on the outside, so he agreed to help her....but then, as he did some digging and all of that, he found out she's not so nice... and that Osana or whatever was actually more of a match, and he's conflicted then because he's already too far in or something. I dunno! But, maybe i'm being too...critical and that made me not enjoy the plot for what it was, yanno? I have a habit of being an over thinking lil shit, and sometimes i forget to just turn that off and enjoy stuff (not always, like i'm not a buzz kill heh, just sometimes) So i'll maybe try the game again, read all the dialogue (of the finished game! just to clarify) and see if i like it then.
Honestly? I could understand why people might not like the art. It's not everyone's cuppa tea and it isn't close to the games art style. Buuut, in my humble opinion, it's very cutesy and it somewhat reminds me a Chibi art style, and i don't know if you were going for that? Either way, i like it and think it's quite adorable. I draw, not digitally (well not often, i haven't gotten into it yet and eh) but i do and my drawings are okay...and personally, i love that kinda style and i wish i could do it nearly as cute as yours were done haha. Ah, i see. I get'cha, i suppose it was just weird since the characters didn't look like they belonged in the scene. But that being said, i'll check out the Hyperforce All Stars thingy later and see how good/bad the backgrounds are. And i'm sure they'll be decent at the very least! (:
I'll definitely play it. yeah? And hey, don't feel bad about getting a decent 'negative' comment. Don't consider it negative, consider it more constructive! (tho i admit it may of been worded really poorly and harshly buuut still!) The only way we learn is by taking on board other peoples perspectives, ideas, opinions and seeing if what we're doing/creating/etc can be moulded to fit that in or fit around that - and sometimes it can't, but it can help us learn something for future. I write stories, and i never finish them. And the worst part? People tell me that what i do write is actually good, but i let myself get so focused on making it perfect...that it being good isn't enough. So please, don't feel disheartened or bad about not being able to do something great or perfect first time around, my advice would to be finish it. Finish it, get people to give feedback and tweak it, whether that be tweaking the dialogue, the way the plot is set up, how the story ends, whatever. Just tweak it and then check if that's any better, and do that till you have a product that you feel is good enough. Obviously you can ask people to read it by chapter or however you decide to tell the story. Just don't be like me and get bummed out that it isn't good enough and stop, because that makes actually finishing and developing harder than it needs to be. (I'm realising now you've probably gone on to finish stories/games now and feel silly for writing that out but yanno, too lazy to delete it so-)
And i'm not sure what other comments you got, but i'm sorry that mine was...so negative in a way, and that it was the only one you felt was decent. I'm just glad you kinda tried to understand where i was coming from rather than get mad, honestly. So i respect you for that. I'll go play the finished one and i'll actually finish it without skipping anything (:
p.s sorry for the long comments, i'm terrible for writing long stuff