This game is really charming! I'm happy to see a male WG-focused game. :) I like the art and writing! Looking forward to seeing more.
One issue I noticed -- there's at least one time where you accidentally had Adam's name instead of Ace's. I noticed it when giving Ace protein shakes and I think there might be another instance.
My main suggestions:
- I'd love more options for feeding characters that didn't need you to go to the gym first.
- More changes to the eating contest results based off individual weights would be cool, it felt kind of weird having my character weigh literally three times as much as Adam and still get outdone by him.
I also really like Ace, his design and personality appeal to me the most! So I have spent the last 10 minutes carefully feeding Ace only through the gym options, never staying the night, because I want to get him get much bigger than Adam. I'd looove to see an eating contest ending where Ace is surprised to end up the winner, or something like that...
I will also say I was a little surprised that there's not much to do with Oscar if he's fat, but I eventually figured out how to do more with him. I'm always trying to fatten everyone up so it just took a while for me to try something else :P
My thoughts on what you have planned:
A graphics update would be great. In particular I think it would be very nice if the character weights/fat/muscle could be in their own menu.
I think that adding time and currency would definitely add immersion to the game, but at the same time might make it more complicated and more difficult/tedious to do certain things (since I would assume that the absurd amounts of food that the characters eat would cost a lot of money, lol.)
What gets me with currency in games like this is that it often adds tedium/grinding and doesn't tend to be all that interesting -- like, it's something that we just kind of mindlessly click through until we get enough ingame money for the fun stuff? So I would maybe try to make the 'work' option interesting for earning money. Maybe the player could become a streamer of kink content to earn money or something like that, and then there could be some fun descriptions around that.