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I've read a few chapters. I like it so far, but the formatting is pretty awful.

The biggest issues are fixed font sizes in pt, and fixed black font color. It makes this extremely unreadable in my device or while in dark mode.

I really liked the atmosphere and the aesthetic. This was a well produced prototype and I can't wait for more. Here's my feedback:

• I don't like the aerial sprite of Miraella, she has her arms so apart she almost looks like she is doing this.
• I can keep walking to the right on the bridge instead of being stopped at the transition point.
• The X key should be able to close the succubus stats page, but I have to use right click.
• I don't think the grid movement is good for this kind of game? Feels very clunky.
• The combat is not engaging as it is now, too simple and easy.

Btw, are you planning on adding f/f content?